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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg.. i loved this chapter! im still in shock that im reading a fic where no smut has come yet... (no pressure, lol) but wow... you delve into the characters minds perfectly.. im in awe.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
amazing. hurry up and update!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this chapter was really good! You pulled it off awesomly. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Interactions between Sasuke and Naruto are bound to be funny.
And you said at the end that people could sign up to the update list. I'm kind of ne on this site... So would you please eh, tell me how to do this?
And you said at the end that people could sign up to the update list. I'm kind of ne on this site... So would you please eh, tell me how to do this?
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooh...i loved the conversation! they were totally IC!
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a good update, I just wish you had written more. And I like that we get to see the situation from both Sasuke's and Naruto's pov. We had some good relationship development this time around and I'm glad that Naruto was able to make his feelings known to Sasuke and Sasuke's reaction was priceless. I can only hope that we get some good smut in the next chapter.
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! I don't see anything wrong with this chapter, I loved it. Though, the thing I always say, is more angst is needed, but that's ANY story though, coz I just love it.. heh. Don't worry, not saying it needs more, lol.
(Oh! And yay, I finally reviewed.. it's me, SkullsRCute, from Y!Gallery, =P)
(Oh! And yay, I finally reviewed.. it's me, SkullsRCute, from Y!Gallery, =P)
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! It definitely has a lot more plot to it than the normal, stereotypical "Naruto in heat" type of fics. The depth of emotion that triggers Naruto's attraction is a nice twist, and I personally like how you made Naruto be attracted to Sasuke AND Sakura. I think it's a lot more like canon. Of course, Naruto ending with Sasuke is always best. :-) Looking forward to the next update, and I would be thrilled to get an e-mail from you at: Jelp4@aol.com letting me know when the next update was. Thanks! ~ Jelp
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter may have taken a long time to write... but let me tell you it was worth it! The balance between the two characters was highly touchy regarding the subject and if handled wrong it could have spelled disaster for the story at large. This conversation was the turning point for the story, and I have to say it was done expertly. You really did a fantastic job with Naruto's confession. You really have a handle on the characters and it is impressively good.
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work. =^^=
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work. =^^=
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...
nah! I like this chapter, why you didn't like it? .:thinks what you silly mind could be thinking:.
yeah.. the truth, is hard ne? Sas'ke???
but I like that Naruto actually notice it... why do I like when sasuke blushes? I think is cute ^-^
nah! I like this chapter, why you didn't like it? .:thinks what you silly mind could be thinking:.
yeah.. the truth, is hard ne? Sas'ke???
but I like that Naruto actually notice it... why do I like when sasuke blushes? I think is cute ^-^