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for My Favorite Mistake

by riddlestar

person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a shocker. I didn't think Naruto would confess!

Can't wait to see where this goes. Please update soon :)
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That actually went well, somewhat ackward. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Moiira
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KYAAA! Love it! can't wait for the rest ^^ YAY!
person Mikra
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke. I'm afraid that bribing with ramen isn't going to work this time with getting Naruto to talk.

I'm having fun reading this multiple times over ^^
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! I was actually beginning to wonder if this fic had died. I'm really happy to see that you're still working on it.

I like that you had Sasuke lose contol of his temper and resort to brute force to get answers. A lot of writers forget what a short fuse he canhave when he's at a disadvantage.

Keep up the good work. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
person Kimya
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw man I'm loving this story. Poor Sasuke. No one is cutting him any slack. Hehe. I really can't wait for their conversation.
person Shinoga
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I love this fic and would love to be on a mailing list for it!! videls_evil_twin@hotmail.com
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for their little mission!! X3 please update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What will Naruto tell Sasuke? Yes, I would like to be added to your mailing list please. Thank you.
person Adu
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a mailing list is a good idea.. you know who i am so im not going to bother writing my email here..hehe. you can call and tell me when you update rite?