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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wanna strangle you or something.
but there has already been enough strangling in this story for the time being.
so. instead i will prostrate myself before your creativity and beg for it to give you the inspiration to update soon.
i await the next chapter.
much love!
Vera-chan!
but there has already been enough strangling in this story for the time being.
so. instead i will prostrate myself before your creativity and beg for it to give you the inspiration to update soon.
i await the next chapter.
much love!
Vera-chan!
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow.. an update!! there were a few typo's here and there but nothing serious. i really liked this one. update soon~
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well... .:points at you:. is not like I forgot your fic, but it has been a while that I forgot the name lol... hahaha actually I started reading it again and then suddenly "omg! I remember" -the 5th of november- jeje
I like the chapter! I want to know who is going with them! .:cuckles darkly:. Tsunade is so evil!!! I luv her!
but hey! do you have something like an update list? or an account on ff or y-gal (you would get like 8888 reviews in there...)
I like the chapter! I want to know who is going with them! .:cuckles darkly:. Tsunade is so evil!!! I luv her!
but hey! do you have something like an update list? or an account on ff or y-gal (you would get like 8888 reviews in there...)
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
After so LONG and it was so SHORT :( i was dissapointed... but at least you updated.. that means you haven't given up on this.. so thats a good thing. please update soon.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe.. I'm glad you updated.. even if it was only a snipet of the whole thing. ^^ Naruto went from being straight to accepting a male mate. Sasuke... he.... he's going to take a little more work. >:) hehehehehe
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: Are you kidding?! I’ve been waiting for updates! No way am I going to give up on this story! . . . . Ooh, “good stuff,” heheh. (*rubs hands together gleefully*) =D
“I must protest,” lol, what a way of saying it, I love it. So formal. XD . . . . “Sasuke felt like strangling the blonde woman in front of him.” Yeah, I don’t blame you. It sounds really frustrating. . . . Heh. Love those last lines: “He would just have to get them from Naruto. First hand.” Ooh, suspense. =D
“Speaking of which,” (*snort*). XD That’ll be Sasuke for you. ^^ . . . . Sasuke shaves? *squeee!* (I like how you slipped that in there. Normally, I wouldn’t like the idea of Sasuke needing to shave, but it sounds alright in this story.) . . . . “He was quite all right where he was, thank you.” ^_^ . . . . “Or rather, commanded.” :hearts!: . . . . Oh boy, there’s the anger I so adore. =D . . . . Great sentence: “Naruto watched his friend’s face [. . .] indifference.” Well-done. . . . I like how Naruto ran the reason through his head, and how he knows he’s caught up in it. Sometimes when a character says, “and only me,” that’s all they hear; they don’t notice how . . . odd it can sound. I like how Naruto noticed that. . . . Love all of Naruto’s perceptions on Sasuke. . . . Heh, “Sasuke was looking at him weirdly.” Yeah. And then . . . “Do you want some ramen?” XD That was so random. I wonder what made him say that. ^^
It was cute. There are still a lot of things I’m curious about, but those’ll be answered in time (unless you give up on the fic which you better not do, *growl*). I probably would’ve liked more to this chapter, but it’s okay if you wanted to keep it updated. I await the next chapter. ^_^
“I must protest,” lol, what a way of saying it, I love it. So formal. XD . . . . “Sasuke felt like strangling the blonde woman in front of him.” Yeah, I don’t blame you. It sounds really frustrating. . . . Heh. Love those last lines: “He would just have to get them from Naruto. First hand.” Ooh, suspense. =D
“Speaking of which,” (*snort*). XD That’ll be Sasuke for you. ^^ . . . . Sasuke shaves? *squeee!* (I like how you slipped that in there. Normally, I wouldn’t like the idea of Sasuke needing to shave, but it sounds alright in this story.) . . . . “He was quite all right where he was, thank you.” ^_^ . . . . “Or rather, commanded.” :hearts!: . . . . Oh boy, there’s the anger I so adore. =D . . . . Great sentence: “Naruto watched his friend’s face [. . .] indifference.” Well-done. . . . I like how Naruto ran the reason through his head, and how he knows he’s caught up in it. Sometimes when a character says, “and only me,” that’s all they hear; they don’t notice how . . . odd it can sound. I like how Naruto noticed that. . . . Love all of Naruto’s perceptions on Sasuke. . . . Heh, “Sasuke was looking at him weirdly.” Yeah. And then . . . “Do you want some ramen?” XD That was so random. I wonder what made him say that. ^^
It was cute. There are still a lot of things I’m curious about, but those’ll be answered in time (unless you give up on the fic which you better not do, *growl*). I probably would’ve liked more to this chapter, but it’s okay if you wanted to keep it updated. I await the next chapter. ^_^
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!!! 8D please write the next part soon.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how the plot is going!
I really love the way you write so deatiled and creatively.
I really hope chapter 9 is coming out soon!
I really love the way you write so deatiled and creatively.
I really hope chapter 9 is coming out soon!
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a horrible place to leave of, just plain evil. Well I hope to see another chapter of this soon.
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, yeah, you tell me "there are more chapters on AFF" but you don't tell me that this cliffie is almost as bad as the one you left me on! gah, i'm goin to your profile and am prolly going to read most if not all your works on both sites.