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no~~~ TT________TT
I'm so sad it's over hehehe
congratulations my dear, you should feel very proud of you <3

and about the last chapter .:drools:. it was really hot, man I loved it
the way the sex developed was really good, you know from Sasuke begin jealous to "don't ask, just do it" was really nice and SO like them... did I say it was so freaking hot?... but really what I loved most was how their relationship developed

aw~ :( why can't I say stuff that makes me look smart? it's just that .:looks around:. I think I need a cold shower

thank you so much for this fic my dear .:glomps:.

Man i feel myself so swirling with emotions right now!! I feel hyped to even continue writing my new fic! that was breathtakingly mindblowing in all sorts of ways..Thank you for this, and i dont regret reading this in one sitting at all.My neck and back hurts but what the hell! i feel like I JUST EXPERIENCED fantastic sex..haha as funny and strange as that sounds. My all time OTP and you protrayed them beautiful and in character...*much loves and kisses for you*

I love you
Don't ever stop writing.

please update soon! i love this story and things are def. starting to heat up and i cant wait to see what happens next!!!

I'm glad that Neji is safe. I can't believe he was found out! Then used as a hostage I wonder what he'll have to say about that once he wakes up. Haha Mitsu-san totally missed how to impersonate Sasuke, seeing him smile and even embrace Naruto twice outside of closed spaces was creepy enough. I hope that there will be some loving after the initial shock of killing someone is over and their back in the village. Or maybe they'll be impatient and can't wait either one will be fantastic.:D

Chapter 15: Lol, a lover’s tiff. ^^ ____ Love how Naruto’s going through the different possible options. “For a supposedly easy mission, this was not going smoothly at all.” ____ And I still wonder where Neji is. For all we know, he could be in disguise as Yahiko. ____ O.O Th-that was c-close. (*shaken*) ____ Heh—Sasuke understood, all right. ____ “You think that Misakagawa knows we're here..” Hmm, I hadn’t considered that. Could be. ____ (*snicker*) “Even if Sasuke was giving him the worse case of blue balls in history …” XD ____ They’re so confident that Yahiko’s not an accomplice of Misakagawa. ____ Lol, “Maybe he went back to Konoha,” being his typical reply. ^^ ____ Love how they’re planning this all out.
Love the suspense. ____ Hmm, so maybe it wasn’t Neji in disguise if the Sharingan isn’t picking up anything. Unless Yahiko did something to Sasuke and he didn’t notice. ____ Lol, “pirate-style.” ^^ ____ “Naruto did not treat dead bodies so casually, never mind if they were Akatsuki.” Is it Naruto, then? ____ Ahhhh, so that’s what happened. ____ Sasuke just contradicted himself when he thought, “So the rumours that not even Itachi had been able to tell Misakagawa apart in the crowd had been true … impossible.” More like, “It shouldn’t be possible … but it was. ____ Heh—“he couldn’t trust that anymore.” ____ Huh? “He would have to use the ---- to check.” What’s with the extra-long hyphen? Well, whatever it was (sounds like it was Tsukiyomi), I liked the description about how it could distract the victim long enough for them to release whatever jutsu they had. ____ Maybe it’s not Naruto. Or maybe it is, and he’s under a spell. Or maybe he’s trying to get someone to give him information. ____ Wait a minute … is Sasuke under a genjutsu? He might have to use the Sharingan to break out of it. And he’s trying not to use it, so … ____ Oh. Holy. Fuck. That’s not good. Man, I wasn’t expecting that.
Strangely, this might help their relationship. Still, I’m kind of surprised that Naruto isn’t suspicious of this guy. Or maybe he is and is pretending not to be. ____ Love how Sasuke’s trying to get a grip on his emotions. ____ You know, I’m wondering if the Sasuke look-alike is Misakagawa or Neji. Probably Misakagawa. ____ Lol: “It was weird, Sasuke thought, to see Naruto with himself; almost like an out of body experience.” Heh—who knows? Maybe it is an out-of-body experience and he doesn’t realize it. Maybe his body is possessed. ____ Lol, Sasuke’s wondering if he thinks Naruto and he look good together. ^^ ____ AHAHAHA, that’s hilarious! “Who was Misakagawa kidding? … Annoyed that he was being acted out so poorly --did he really come across as such a fag?-- Sasuke leapt to the ground …” XD Love how indignant he is over the whole deal.
Alright, Naruto’s thinking on the same track as Sasuke. Nice. =) ____ Lol, “… [he was] a little creeped out by the smile on his face. Man, no wonder [Sasuke] didn’t smile that often … it was pretty comical to look at his friend’s features when they were like that. He didn’t know whether to laugh or stare in fascination …” Good description. XD But, I dunno, I think Sasuke can look pretty nice when he smiles. Naruto’s probably not used to it, though. ____ Heh—“wait till Sakura-chan heard about this!” ^^ ____ Could be Neji over the guy’s shoulder. ____ “However it was the mix of intense fear and hate currently on his face that threw him the most. Damn. [Sasuke] would kill Misakagawa for just daring to form that expression.” That’s an interesting line. Because we’ve seen that expression on Sasuke’s face many times. He probably doesn’t enjoy the thought of it, though. Probably also feels like another invasion of privacy. I wonder how Misakagawa’s version of it differs from Sasuke’s, though. ____ This has got to be one of my favorite scenes! This is so awesome! =D ____ Ahhhhh, good idea, Sasuke. Clever. (*snort*) Naruto’s studying his nails? >w< That’s a little hard to imagine, but it’s funny. Kind of OOC, though. ____ This is kinda cool, considering how Misakagawa still looks like Sasuke while the real Sasuke is threatening him. ____ Alright. Love it how Naruto threatened him with Kyuubi chakra. ____ You know, Misakagawa’s abilities remind me a little of Karin’s and her elusiveness.
Ah-HAH! Knew that was Neji! Unless Misakagawa’s just doing something to make it look like Neji; a last act of defiance, so that when Naruto and Sasuke kill him and later realize that the corpse isn’t Neji, Misakagawa still won something from them in the end. This is all just an idea, of course. It probably is the real Neji. ____ Good, he’s alive. Now he’s got some explaining to do when he wakes up, lol. ____ I wonder if the guy still looked like Sasuke when the real Sasuke killed him. I wonder how that must’ve felt. ____ Aww, that’s sweet. Yahiko’s going to be heart-broken enough. ____ Lol, love the dark humor between Naruto and Sasuke after the grave was made. ^^;

can't wait for the next update!-- i love this story and cant wait for some good smutty-ness!! X3

At first i wanted to pout and sulk that there was no smut, but you're right. it would be out of character for them to be so insensitive. I'm happy you updated and please dont take too long for the nexxt chapter.

I am totally loving the way this is developing and can't wait to read more. I'm lookin' forward to some lovin', but I know things have to run their course so kudos for not rushing anything. Keep up the good work!!!

Congrats on your move to the UK. I wish I was doing something that exciting.

Also... updates!!! Hip hip fucking hooray! Woo hoo!!!!
I always get excited when I see one of my favorite stories back from the dead. The fact that I have an obsession with zombie movies has nothing to do with it! I would love to see you finish this story to the very end. (Personally, it will be a fun evolution to watch as you slowly start adding an extra "u" to all your words. Colour, favour, youur. lol) ^^

Keep up the great work!