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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That SOUNDED like a threat to me :p Great chapter. I hope poor Sasuke doesn't get ravished........;}
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really really really x34793 liked your story. And don't worry, your first fic did't suck half as bad as mine did, wait *record screetch* yours did't suck at all. Accualy, I was disapointed when the "What the f--" ended T.T it was very interesting, wait.. why am I blabbing so much? Oh well. Think what ya want of me, but still I really liked your story, and accually it encouraged and gave me inspiration to wright my own naruxasu. So for the sake of the yaoi fanfic readers.. please continue!! *gets on both knees and bows up and down*
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHH! THAT WAS EVIL! >.< I wanna read more D: Please please PLEASE update soon!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You mah dear are a T.E.A.S.E! Arg what a place to leave it! Though hopefully Naruto will get everything under control before he does something he regrets. *sighs*
It did seem like you had kept everything in perspective... Anyhooe great update and I look forward to the next. Ja Ne.
It did seem like you had kept everything in perspective... Anyhooe great update and I look forward to the next. Ja Ne.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, you're story is good but there are so many mistakes! If you are wanting them to speak then use these "" because it's better like that and you spelled some things wrong but nothing to horrible! I enjoyed reading the story and I liked he part when Sasuke called Naruto a puppy!LOL XD!
"Pupp....XD HAHAHAHA!"
RiRi ♥
"Pupp....XD HAHAHAHA!"
RiRi ♥
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
an early update !! well, a little confusing.. but it made sense. u better update soon~
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehhe ... that was kinda cute! you see fics where sasu is the predator and naru is the prey, so it's very refreshing to see the reverse. oooooh, let's see what sasu does next, hmmm?
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good story still!!.. curious on how far Naruto will take thing with a trapped Sasuke... hmm.. SasUKE anyone??.. XD.. looking forward to the next chapter!!!
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No.... that wasn't a threat at all, but I gave in. more soon please, that was just a mean and horrible place to leave it.... ha ha, good job
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had no trouble following the flow of the story. Please continue because I eagerly await the next chapter.