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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh....here is my review! It is ok to threaten! I so like the way you write...and I am picky about the way plot develops, and sentence structure...and grammar. And yers is really good! I dont review often, so I really really love this story. I can't wait to see what Naruto does to Sasuke.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it :) and its ok to threaten. its an authors license. hehe.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! More! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the SECOND cliffie tonight!!!! I don't think I can take it anymore!!!!!
please. post. soon.
please. post. soon.
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg, nooo!
I hate cliffhangers!
You evil author you xD
At first when I started reading this fic, I was half convinced, but fueled on by boredom more then anything.
HOWEVER, after reading about Naruto little "problem", I have to admit, I'm interested.
Its not like those regular "in heat" yaoi fics.
(Y'know the types, Naruto just HAS to sleep with Sasuke cuz no one else will do. Not true.)
What I like the most, is how STRAIGHT you made Naruto xDD
Omg, the little scene between him and Sakura had me going back to make sure I was still in the male\male section, lol.
But, like I said, its interesting, and certainly a fresh change of pace.
It makes his attraction to Sasuke all the more akward and confusing.
(Awww, how cute x3)
I honestly can't wait to see how this turns out and how you get them together~
Please update soon!
Cliffies are EVIL! DDx
I hate cliffhangers!
You evil author you xD
At first when I started reading this fic, I was half convinced, but fueled on by boredom more then anything.
HOWEVER, after reading about Naruto little "problem", I have to admit, I'm interested.
Its not like those regular "in heat" yaoi fics.
(Y'know the types, Naruto just HAS to sleep with Sasuke cuz no one else will do. Not true.)
What I like the most, is how STRAIGHT you made Naruto xDD
Omg, the little scene between him and Sakura had me going back to make sure I was still in the male\male section, lol.
But, like I said, its interesting, and certainly a fresh change of pace.
It makes his attraction to Sasuke all the more akward and confusing.
(Awww, how cute x3)
I honestly can't wait to see how this turns out and how you get them together~
Please update soon!
Cliffies are EVIL! DDx
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's interesting, and you have Sasuke decently in character, something not many people can actually accomplish.
I hope you continue soon!
I hope you continue soon!
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, good job. both are definately in character. will be waiting for your next update :D
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot woot!! you take too long to update girl!! hmph! but its worth it, lol. btw, i aboslutely loath the evil cliffie at the end... evil author u!!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.