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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story makes me happy. xD You have a very fun style and the situation that you've concocted for these two is absolutely precious. I almost feel sorry for poor little Sasuke... Almost. Also, if you are still interested in a BETA, feel free to let me know. My email is Rhobles@gmail.com. Just send me the file (or text) and I'll proofread for you and send it back. I hope you have a nice holiday and that you update soon, yo. ^o^
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that's really good for your first fic! :D The first chapter really captivated me ;D It's well written, the characters also seem to be IC and your chapter ends with a cliffhanger making the readers waiting for more :D So don't worry yourself too much because your story is great.
I'll wait for your next chapter :)
I'll wait for your next chapter :)
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, another naruchan in heat story, huh? ought to be interesting .. can't wait to see where you go with it. *evil laugh*!
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Going to keep this short and simple. Moar!
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah. Please update, I really wanna see what happens next!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good!! You have me intrigued with this first chapter!! :)
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story's really interesting so far....come on...add some chaps....(~__^)
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uh oh....sasuke it coming face to face with a demon heat
*evil smile*
update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
*evil smile*
update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter! Please continue!!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NICEEEE!!! quite well written. and i am really looking fwd to the next chapter~~