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Woo hoo! If reading your description of this story is correct, then FINALLY someone will have written a Naruto in heat story that doesn't end with him on the bottom. >:D hehehe, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

As for a critique, overall I did not find the transition too confusing. At first, yeah, I though Naruto's pov was a continuation from where Sasuke's left off, but by the end it made clear and perfect sense. I also loved the fact that you kept Naruto filled with self doubt so that he couldn't possible make the assumption that people talking about someone good looking couldn't possibly be about him. It seems like the kind of internal monologue his character would have. ^^ Nice touch. Sasuke's still a jerk, but he wouldn't be in character otherwise. Keep up the good work! I look forward to chapter 2. <3

This chapter was really good and peaked my interest, I would love to read more soon.

This was great writing so far...I'm looking forward to the D/s, Non-con and anal, though!

Oooh! I'm definitely hooked! This story sounds really interesting. What's gonna happen between Naruto and Sasuke? I can't wait to find out.

OH NO! You have got to hurry up and update! So good, so good. *drools while imagining the up and coming lemon*

hahah, oooh. Definetly update soon! :D

Wow. I wanna see this! LoL Good start! Update.

sounds awesome. From the reviews I wasn't so sure about his Naruto top thing. But perhaps he's not?