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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was good, it was a little uneventful plot wise but there was some very good advancement on the relationship front. I think Sasuke is beginning to give in to his feelings and Naruto is getting better at controlling his. I am a little worried about Neji not being reachable, he's not the type to disappear from his responsibilities in such a way. It looks like Sasuke may have to detain Yahiko before the plan has even started, everything seems a little too easy at this point, I hope that it really is as simple as it seems.
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
At first I thought Yahko was the target walking by, but he's actually Yahkio going to the house...
I forget why they have to kill him, but I wonder if there is a misunderstanding? Maybe not.
I wonder where Neji is...
I can't wait for the mission to be over so Sasuke and Naruto can really talk (and stuff...).
Keep up the good work!
At first I thought Yahko was the target walking by, but he's actually Yahkio going to the house...
I forget why they have to kill him, but I wonder if there is a misunderstanding? Maybe not.
I wonder where Neji is...
I can't wait for the mission to be over so Sasuke and Naruto can really talk (and stuff...).
Keep up the good work!
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you know that last thing about the kid suddenly seemed suspicious
I loved when Naruto left the place and Sasuke came closer to him... idk why (maybe 'cause I'm weird) but I really liked that part ^^
I loved when Naruto left the place and Sasuke came closer to him... idk why (maybe 'cause I'm weird) but I really liked that part ^^
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh,oh! That's not good! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this fic and I have to say, it's going great! I love the situation that you put Naruto in with his rut situation. Thank you for posting, please update again soon.
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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
new reader egerly awaiting more. you are a very good writer. :)
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man! i kinda forgot about this story- IM SORRY! but when i saw an update i was so excited! i was pretty far behind but man did it get good! loved the little smut scene you gave us-- very sexxy! ;3 i love how sasuke is the workin in the hotel-- thought it would be naruto but this is so much better! sasuke talking with people!? i knew it could only be a matter of time till he hit someone X3 that was the best!! please update soon! im back on track and yearnin for more!
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you and I'm leaving this only to make your large numbers even bigger! XD
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May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay! ^^ Awesome chapter. I feel so sorry for both Naruto and Sasuke they can't just figure it out, but on the other hand it makes for excellent tension!
And Sasuke punch to Ara was perfect.
And Sasuke punch to Ara was perfect.
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
an UPDATTEEEE!! awesome. i liked it, even though it was slower than the other chapters.