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for My Favorite Mistake

by riddlestar

person vashta
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a great fic. I am enjoying it a lot, but the angst is getting to me. Will Naru make progress soon? You've been drawing it out for what seems like years! I know, I know it always seems that way when you are anxious. Nice work.

Vashta
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I like that Sasuke is moving through his feelings for Naruto, slowly but surely. I think that I would have liked to see more of a Sasuke and Naruto interaction than what we have seen in this chapter. The plot is important but the relationship between those two is the important piece of the puzzle. I was kind of hoping that Naruto would henge into Sasuke to see what his job is like but they are trying to keep a low profile. I'm not sure exactly what this mission is about and why its so important, I think I might have glossed over it, I need to go back and see what is so important about catching their target. Can't wait to see what happens next, good work.
person CaptorSakura
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, is the guy gonna ask for Sasuke to go to his room? Naruto is gonna be so pissed when he follows them~
Waaah, update this right now!! >_<
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you are doing very wonderful! loved what you have done so far! keep it up!

miko ~_^
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD!!! Im so happy to see the update that I screamed. lol. I cant wait to see what happens next. And that punch. Go Sasu-chan! Kick his ass!
*ahem* Sorry about that. And poor Naru-sama. Sasu needs to hurry up and take it up the ass! I Mean!!! Give into Naruto. lol
person Word_Slave
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was wonderful! I'm so enjoying it I can't believe it and was thrilled to see it updated. Miss talking to you! hope all is well
person Eternus_Enigma
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW. *drooling and laughing stupidly* That was hot. One can tell you've put effort in this story, unlike some other writers who simply write for the sake of writing. Keep up the wonderful work. ♥ It's addicting.
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So much angst over such a simple and clear answer awesome keep it coming!!
person Xpyne
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! haha, way too short for my tastes, but wonderful nonetheless. :D keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to the next update!
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THose were an awesome two chapters! I'd already read the rest.
Naruto should really have chosen someone a liiiiitle easier to handle.
And to reasure you, the smut was good.
Well, I'm really looking forwards to the next chapters.
And I like the plot so far by the way. Although, I have the feeling something horrible is going to be happening.

Oh, well. Only you can tell us XD
Lane.