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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a great fic. I am enjoying it a lot, but the angst is getting to me. Will Naru make progress soon? You've been drawing it out for what seems like years! I know, I know it always seems that way when you are anxious. Nice work.
Vashta
Vashta
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I like that Sasuke is moving through his feelings for Naruto, slowly but surely. I think that I would have liked to see more of a Sasuke and Naruto interaction than what we have seen in this chapter. The plot is important but the relationship between those two is the important piece of the puzzle. I was kind of hoping that Naruto would henge into Sasuke to see what his job is like but they are trying to keep a low profile. I'm not sure exactly what this mission is about and why its so important, I think I might have glossed over it, I need to go back and see what is so important about catching their target. Can't wait to see what happens next, good work.
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, is the guy gonna ask for Sasuke to go to his room? Naruto is gonna be so pissed when he follows them~
Waaah, update this right now!! >_<
Waaah, update this right now!! >_<
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you are doing very wonderful! loved what you have done so far! keep it up!
miko ~_^
miko ~_^
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD!!! Im so happy to see the update that I screamed. lol. I cant wait to see what happens next. And that punch. Go Sasu-chan! Kick his ass!
*ahem* Sorry about that. And poor Naru-sama. Sasu needs to hurry up and take it up the ass! I Mean!!! Give into Naruto. lol
*ahem* Sorry about that. And poor Naru-sama. Sasu needs to hurry up and take it up the ass! I Mean!!! Give into Naruto. lol
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was wonderful! I'm so enjoying it I can't believe it and was thrilled to see it updated. Miss talking to you! hope all is well
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW. *drooling and laughing stupidly* That was hot. One can tell you've put effort in this story, unlike some other writers who simply write for the sake of writing. Keep up the wonderful work. ♥ It's addicting.
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So much angst over such a simple and clear answer awesome keep it coming!!
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! haha, way too short for my tastes, but wonderful nonetheless. :D keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to the next update!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THose were an awesome two chapters! I'd already read the rest.
Naruto should really have chosen someone a liiiiitle easier to handle.
And to reasure you, the smut was good.
Well, I'm really looking forwards to the next chapters.
And I like the plot so far by the way. Although, I have the feeling something horrible is going to be happening.
Oh, well. Only you can tell us XD
Lane.
Naruto should really have chosen someone a liiiiitle easier to handle.
And to reasure you, the smut was good.
Well, I'm really looking forwards to the next chapters.
And I like the plot so far by the way. Although, I have the feeling something horrible is going to be happening.
Oh, well. Only you can tell us XD
Lane.