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Chapter 12: Love how you described Sasuke’s frustration. ____ Oh, so he was being deliberate. ____ Love the rising tension. I like it how Naruto says the effect the Kyuubi’s having on himself and how Sasuke’s “hackles rise.” ♥ ____ Hmm. So much for subtlety. ____ Forget how those lips’ll look, Sasuke—imagine how they’ll feel. ;-) ____ Heh—Sasuke feels that blame has to be assigned somewhere, and now it’s turned onto him. ____ The feelings during the lemon are captivating. ____ Love the line, “But then doubt returned, dark and heavy . . .” It made me feel it. ____ Love how Sasuke’s worried about how he’s not sure what to feel. He’s worried about them surviving through . . . his possible wrong response. ____ Yeah, I can imagine that Sasuke would worry over serious decisions. He knows how to keep a mood somewhat dark. =) ♥

It was pretty good! ^_^

This chapter was great!! I absolutely loved it. (The smut was good too.)

I hope Sasuke is able to overcome his fears of intamacy. Also, how hot was it that Naruto's teeth were a bit sharper and his behavior a bit feral. >:) hehehe I loved it.

Keep up the great work.

I can't believe I missed so many updates! But then again I have a job now that keeps me out late and I've been trying to also give the computer a rest. These chapters were great. I'm so happy to find them after my long hiatus from reading Naruto fics. I love that Naruto is wearing Sasuke down! just little bit more Naruto! Please updates as soon as possible! ^_^

Your fan,
~Kismet

wow, im frankly really really surprised that you updated so early!! and happy!

this chapter was good. the smut was good too. not as good as your one shot, but still good. you dont need to worry. update soon ~

hey great chapter!
keep it up :)

I like the way the characters are fleshing out. Its believable, and well written.

hey, awesome dialogue. This is really impressive,- I like the way Naruto has a believable dark side which is not the Kyuubi. *evil laugh*

Finally! now things are going to get really interesting *grin grin*

God, I love this story! And it took me so long to read this. Sorry? Sorry? ^^'

There's something unholy about the way you write tension between them, it's just so.freaking.good! And I love your writing style (I think it's a little bit similar to mine, actually), it's so clear and easy to follow.

And I'm sorry the review is kinda blah, I had a really long, tiring day. I'll give you a proper one when the next chapter comes out. XD

Read the whole thing in one fell swoop, my goodness! I love this fic! This last chapter really had me blushing a bit, and grinning. Sasuke calling Naruto 'dobe' during was very fitting and made me grin. But it really did make me just want to shake him and wish for him to give in and just let Naruto pound him through a mattress. And Sasuke is nice and complicated as he should be. And Naruto is so... amazing. I can't think of anything else to describe him that's fitting. Really, they both are. I look forward to the next chapter.