rate_review Reviews

You have managed to catch my attention with this fic thus far, it is interesting. I was a little weary at the beginning that it might become a meaningless PWP, but you have definitely kept my attention and proved that there is a good plot involved. Don't get me wrong, smut can be fun, but only when it is well-written, though i would rather read plot than porn any day. I am eagerly awaiting the next update. Keep up the good work. If you ever need another beta, I am willing to lend a hand, just email me. Ja!

>Xander<

thish fic ish love *hearts* Yayz for updatez! Woot!! Awesome chapter! and yes Sasuke is just innately emo, its in his blood XD

You totally shouldn't worry about the smut, it's excellent! I especially like how Sasuke gives in.

Also... yay! You updated twice in not so long! I am very happy now.

Oh wow, put me on the update list! I love that this isn't just about hot raunchy sex, which, don't get me wrong, is great to read. But the character development is there too here, you can see how fragile this relationship is and how difficult it is, and how they're both going to have work harder on it than they have on anything else to make it work.

It really is a beautiful story, and I commend you for it.

I hope Sasuke makes the right decision about having a serious relationship with Naruto! Hurry with the next chapter!!

You rule. The smut was fine, very fine. I wish they'd gone... all the way. *wriggles eyebrows*

Can't wait to see more! God, Sasuke's such a hardheaded brat.

I'm sorry I didn't comment on more of your chapters, but I was just so interested in reading them. *__*

You do have some pretty explicit grammar issues, (XDD), but your story's good.

I'm dying for some more x___x

Appease your fans! ;___;


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I enjoyed the smut - not to say I wouldnt, but I thought it was written well and appropriate for the stage their relationship is in. Full blown sex would've been woah too soon and anything less then getting naked together with all their tension would've been a let down. So I think you did a good job! Also, you do well with expressing Naruto's... -need- and urgency not for sex, but for Sasuke himself. I've always loved this story... ^___^ Can't wait for moar!

I hope sasuke get's a clue....he can only be happy with Naruto.

Post soon!!

so i just sat here and read it all, and while there are plenty of things that i would suggest correcting (especially in the first chapters before you got the beta) it wasn't enough to throw me off of this plot. it's a fun and interesting story. i like that you took the cliche of naruto's going into heat because of the fox and made it your own.

naruto is too cute in this story. i love that he's worried about not only how it'll affect his teammates and his partners, but he's worried about still trying to be himself at the same time. and after his reaction to sasuke, he's worried more about sasuke than he his himself. how perfectly cute and in character for naruto. and sasuke, poor confused little man. i love that he's not even really sure why he's doing some of the things he's doing- either that or he's way too scared to make an admission to his actions. he's trying to be cool, and failing miserably.

naruto's cockiness in regards to sasuke is a nice touch. it shows just how much he knows about sasuke and how much faith he has in him to trust him to take the steps without having to be forced. and i really like that he isn't being forced, it'll make it that much more intimate when they finally do take the next step in their relationship. and poor panicking sasuke at the end of chapter 12. i like that he was freaking out, that he was scared about what was happening, but lost in the pleasure of it all too. it's a nice and wonderful touch, it makes it that much more realistic and believable. plus, scared sasuke is one of my favorites.

i like the dynamics of the relationship between the boys. it's fun and we can believe it as it progresses. they are growing together. naruto is doing everything he can to not push sasuke into a relationship, and at the same time, he's encouraging things to happen.

i like this story a lot. i really do. i can't wait for the next update, and i really hope it's not long in coming. btw, if you need beta help, feel free to use me darling. i'm on y! with you.