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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SMUT!! *dances* it was really good.
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You little snot! You didn't tell me you had it done! and It's great. There are only like two small mistakes, otherwise it's perfect and the smut was beautiful hun. Love you!
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! :)
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i usually dont review but i suppose i had to since its ure birthday n all.. lol. happy birthday!
great story, keep it up!
great story, keep it up!
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(Sure has been a long time.
Oh, Happy Birthday! ♥)
Chapter 11: Hmm, that’s quite a dilemma Naruto’s got there. =\ ____ Lol, “The bastard sure knew how to ruin the mood.” ^_^ ____ What would happen if Sasuke refused Naruto too long? It seems to indicate that Naruto would die, but surely that’s not the case. ____ Lol, “All he needed was Sasuke to want and believe it too.” That’s all he needs. ^^; ____ Heh—love how Naruto works himself into confidence that it’ll all work out. =) ____ Ahhh, interesting: “After all, if Sasuke didn’t care about him, he wouldn’t have stopped him like he did at the hot springs. He would have gone ahead, unmindful.” Very clever. =) ____ Yay, an idea. The suspense is fun. ____ Okay, this last paragraph of the scene is scaring me. What is going to do??
Love how insecure Sasuke is. He’s in unfamiliar territory. ____ I really like this line: “. . . wonder if he would be even able to resist Naruto, now that he had a taste of what it would be like with him.” =) ____ Heh—Sasuke realizes that this might not pass when he thinks the word “permanent”. =) ____ Yeesh, he’s so threatened that he feels the need to grab a kunai? o.O Dang, talk about overreacting. ____ Love how suspicious Sasuke is, and he’s not sure what he’s suspicious of. ^_^
Hahaha, he can’t forget. ^^ I’m surprised that Sasuke doesn’t just jerk off so he can relax. ____ Mm, I don’t know if I’ve mentioned this in earlier reviews, but it’s not really necessary to call Neji “the Hyuuga” or Sasuke “the Uchiha”. To me it sounds a little . . . exaggerated. ____ “has been in rain only for a total . . .” I’d capitalize the “r” in “rain”, since you’re talking about a country. ____ Hmm, interesting detail about the target. Makes me wonder what these guys plan to use the info for. ____ Yeach, a whorehouse for pedophiles? >.< That’s . . . sad. ____ I like their discussion on the mission. It sounds . . . really cool, if you ask me. ^^ (Sorry, I know that sounds kinda dumb, but I like it.) ____ Love Sasuke’s irritation at not getting the whole story. ____ Boy, that’s gotta be rough, taking those kinds of orders from Neji. Neji can really flaunt himself when he wants to. ____ Lol, “Fucking jerk.” XD
“Sasuke was such an idiot sometimes.” Me too, apparently. I’m lost. -_-; ____ Oho—! The landlord leering at Sasuke. XD ____ LOL, his question! XDD You wish, man! (No wonder Sasuke’s in a bad mood. And it’s wet out.) ____ There’s not much about Sasuke that isn’t attractive, that’s for sure. ____ Well, the outfit could be worse, I suppose . . . ____ Hmm. For Neji to know all the little details about the mission, I’m a little surprised he didn’t tell Sasuke. (Well, not really.) I wonder if he could get in trouble for that. ____ Sasuke definitely knows how to make an outfit look good on him. Intentionally or not. ____ Hard work? ____ Lol, “the bastard had done that on purpose!” *__* (*drool*) ____ Lol, N: “What are you doing?” S: “Leaving.” ^_^ ____ Okay, Naruto’s beginning to blow the situation out of proportion. Byproduct of sexual frustration? ____ And Sasuke’s not the only tease around here, riddlestar. You’ve got some nerve leaving it right there. (*glares*) Lol, I’m only joking. ^^;
Oh, Happy Birthday! ♥)
Chapter 11: Hmm, that’s quite a dilemma Naruto’s got there. =\ ____ Lol, “The bastard sure knew how to ruin the mood.” ^_^ ____ What would happen if Sasuke refused Naruto too long? It seems to indicate that Naruto would die, but surely that’s not the case. ____ Lol, “All he needed was Sasuke to want and believe it too.” That’s all he needs. ^^; ____ Heh—love how Naruto works himself into confidence that it’ll all work out. =) ____ Ahhh, interesting: “After all, if Sasuke didn’t care about him, he wouldn’t have stopped him like he did at the hot springs. He would have gone ahead, unmindful.” Very clever. =) ____ Yay, an idea. The suspense is fun. ____ Okay, this last paragraph of the scene is scaring me. What is going to do??
Love how insecure Sasuke is. He’s in unfamiliar territory. ____ I really like this line: “. . . wonder if he would be even able to resist Naruto, now that he had a taste of what it would be like with him.” =) ____ Heh—Sasuke realizes that this might not pass when he thinks the word “permanent”. =) ____ Yeesh, he’s so threatened that he feels the need to grab a kunai? o.O Dang, talk about overreacting. ____ Love how suspicious Sasuke is, and he’s not sure what he’s suspicious of. ^_^
Hahaha, he can’t forget. ^^ I’m surprised that Sasuke doesn’t just jerk off so he can relax. ____ Mm, I don’t know if I’ve mentioned this in earlier reviews, but it’s not really necessary to call Neji “the Hyuuga” or Sasuke “the Uchiha”. To me it sounds a little . . . exaggerated. ____ “has been in rain only for a total . . .” I’d capitalize the “r” in “rain”, since you’re talking about a country. ____ Hmm, interesting detail about the target. Makes me wonder what these guys plan to use the info for. ____ Yeach, a whorehouse for pedophiles? >.< That’s . . . sad. ____ I like their discussion on the mission. It sounds . . . really cool, if you ask me. ^^ (Sorry, I know that sounds kinda dumb, but I like it.) ____ Love Sasuke’s irritation at not getting the whole story. ____ Boy, that’s gotta be rough, taking those kinds of orders from Neji. Neji can really flaunt himself when he wants to. ____ Lol, “Fucking jerk.” XD
“Sasuke was such an idiot sometimes.” Me too, apparently. I’m lost. -_-; ____ Oho—! The landlord leering at Sasuke. XD ____ LOL, his question! XDD You wish, man! (No wonder Sasuke’s in a bad mood. And it’s wet out.) ____ There’s not much about Sasuke that isn’t attractive, that’s for sure. ____ Well, the outfit could be worse, I suppose . . . ____ Hmm. For Neji to know all the little details about the mission, I’m a little surprised he didn’t tell Sasuke. (Well, not really.) I wonder if he could get in trouble for that. ____ Sasuke definitely knows how to make an outfit look good on him. Intentionally or not. ____ Hard work? ____ Lol, “the bastard had done that on purpose!” *__* (*drool*) ____ Lol, N: “What are you doing?” S: “Leaving.” ^_^ ____ Okay, Naruto’s beginning to blow the situation out of proportion. Byproduct of sexual frustration? ____ And Sasuke’s not the only tease around here, riddlestar. You’ve got some nerve leaving it right there. (*glares*) Lol, I’m only joking. ^^;
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Days! What a wonderful update. Thank you. Please keep them coming! I want to see Naruto put Sasuke in his place, underneath.
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No! I want to read the next part but you don't update often. Please, I've been waiting, and thanks for not giving up on this story.
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday!!! (Although I must admit, with this update, I feel like I'm getting the presents. ^^)
Keep up the great work!!
Keep up the great work!!
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay! this is one of my favourites and it finally updated! I love you! And -what- an update?! Oh, Sasuke's gonna get it now, the bastard. *can't wait*
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update~~~~~~~~ <3
.:touchdown dance:.
ok... so~~~ the chapter... hehehe I like Naruto's move, he is right, he has to give value to himself (<- totally not making sense) I wonder what did Neji thought when Naruto went to sleep with him WAHAHAHAHA!
so this guy, it seems like he is really really sneaky I wonder if the sharingan is gonna be able to see through the illusion :D
yeay :D
and of course happy bday .:kisses:.
.:touchdown dance:.
ok... so~~~ the chapter... hehehe I like Naruto's move, he is right, he has to give value to himself (<- totally not making sense) I wonder what did Neji thought when Naruto went to sleep with him WAHAHAHAHA!
so this guy, it seems like he is really really sneaky I wonder if the sharingan is gonna be able to see through the illusion :D
yeay :D
and of course happy bday .:kisses:.