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for Torima's Vessel

by jenniferboka

person klv
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is an AWESOME story, and I can't wait to read the next chapter, whether you post it in a week or in a year. Though, of course, I would prefer the former. It's a great story! I love your characters, and Kakashi is even hotter from you than he is from Kishimoto! It's freaking hilarious that she was the one who gave him an Icha Icha. And that he bled through the nose! And on a mission, too! So cute. But, it would seem plausible that the reason he can read it in public now is that he had to internalize the character so much that he could be him. Cool.

Anyway, I hope you continue this story soon, and in the meantime it will adorn my list of bookmarks.

Thanks!
Klv
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beyond Xcellent! YES,all the jutsu an land name sounds very real.arigato
person NeeN
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! supa cool!!!!!
person Hally
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd lve to see the pic!!
awsome chap by the way, I can't wait to know more
Happy holidys!!!
person jaki
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
smazing again!!1
person NeeN
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wowww another totally awsome chappy!
person Hally
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!
how could you not like gai though!(other than the way to close with lee part) he's such a cool character!!
can't wait for chapter 2!!!
person jaki
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SUperfaboulous!!
person NeeN
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fing AMAZing!!!!!!!!!!!
person Hally
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You otally rock!!! just amazing! a great story love the chapter and how you debelop the characters!!!!!!!!!!