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for Closer

by Chima

person dddarkwriter
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh....Holy cow...I...I didn't breath through half of that. It's been a long time since I have last been so very entertained and actually....Like...I have nothing more to say. Thank you for making this, and making my day. Keep up the amazing writing.

-D.D.Darkwriter
person goddess of song
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
guh, that was sooo hot. i think i just died :P
person lucrecia
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi is a huge perv.lol
I love this.
person animekid
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o_o;

This was hot as hell

this...fic...turned me the fuck on. That's a first since I read smut to the high heavens and what not.

I don't care what anyone says....this was......wonderful....sweet...and hot...

o_o;;;


If I could have nosebleeds i would right now; the personalities during the whole thing fit each character, how lee found them was believeable, and god......god....

DAMMIT I WANT MOAR! ><

PLEASE!

ARG *grips hair* I am addicted! All my pairings into one!

Hell I want to make some now! But I'm in a smut rut >_<;

*sobs* it's worse than candy.
person cynaga
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! delicious!

squish~
person mihoshi
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Especially when Gai wakes to see Lee fucking Kakashi. I think I got a nosebleed.
person PrplGrl
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job! That held my attention!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The things that came out of my mouth were something along the lines of: "Gah hatta gha gah hattaka genta tatata gaaaahhhh....." I swear. That. Was. So. Hot. Seriously.