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by Chima

schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I, too, do not condone rape in any real form, that act within reality is abhorrent to me. But I do enjoy the fictional form (Hentai and stories), and I did thoroughly enjoy this tale. I think its the best written N/c Naruto fanfic I've read. Nay. The best Naruto lemon flavored fanfic overall that I've read yet.

Normally I find myself needing some sort of plot to lure me in. Set the scene. To make poor Sakura's predicament all the more sweet. You got it right with just the first bit of your story. It was short and sweet. Amazing wording. Mmmm. Thank you! I simply felt compelled to stop my all-night marathon of reading Naruto lemony goodness to take the time to let you know how wonderful your story is.

Thank you for posting it even if it was a gift for a friend. It made my morning.

An aroused fangirl
person Panther Eyes
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
will team 7 avenge sakura? will she tell them kisame raped her? if she does naruto/kyuubi is going on a rampage.
person Kagome.is.better
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far, it seems like it could be really good please update soon!!!! I wanna see where this goes!!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Intense. Indeed.

I do not agree tho, about feeling bad for writing this. Rape is as much apart of society as murder and assult. It's just another topic that happends to be hard to read AND write. Good job on both.

Would have liked a...better ending? / more closure to the ending?
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes writing stories like this can be therapy not only for you the "watcher" of what happens to your friend but also your friend. Almost as if you distance yourselves from it for just a moment. I am very glad to know you are that good of a friend to her enough to even think about the darkness she may have gone through. It is well written and I thank -you for posting it.
person roxnroll
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was different, but good. I would like to see where this goes.
Rox