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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The plot of this fic is really unique. I hope you decide to finish it. It's definitely a new take on the "Sleeping Beauty" story. I like that Sasuke doesn't want to wake Naruto up for romantic reasons, or out of greed, like all the adventurers, even the hero did in the original story.
Something I'm wondering is, why are Haku, Kiba, and Kakashi so loyal to Naruto? I can see why they'd feel sorry for him in a general way, same as you'd feel sorry for anyone who's had a bad lot in life, but these guys are specifically concerned for Naruto. Doesn't seem like they'd have a chance to get that attached to him if he rarely gets woken up? If he was only awoken once while Haku's been around, then it would mean Haku has only technically met him once?
I want to see how you get Naruto and Sasuke to meet. Sasuke has been hating Naruto and the Kyuubi for so long that unlike the prince in the original story, he wouldn't fall in love with Naruto so easily. Well, the original story was about the injustice done to Sleeping Beauty and her kingdom. The prince himself wasn't all that important, just that he was needed to provide Sleeping Beauty with a happy ending since he arrived just at the curse was ending. This fic feels more like the opposite, like the prince's journey is what's important and Sleeping Beauty is what's needed to make him happy. If Sasuke can quit seeing the world in black and white he'll be able to earn Naruto?
Something I'm wondering is, why are Haku, Kiba, and Kakashi so loyal to Naruto? I can see why they'd feel sorry for him in a general way, same as you'd feel sorry for anyone who's had a bad lot in life, but these guys are specifically concerned for Naruto. Doesn't seem like they'd have a chance to get that attached to him if he rarely gets woken up? If he was only awoken once while Haku's been around, then it would mean Haku has only technically met him once?
I want to see how you get Naruto and Sasuke to meet. Sasuke has been hating Naruto and the Kyuubi for so long that unlike the prince in the original story, he wouldn't fall in love with Naruto so easily. Well, the original story was about the injustice done to Sleeping Beauty and her kingdom. The prince himself wasn't all that important, just that he was needed to provide Sleeping Beauty with a happy ending since he arrived just at the curse was ending. This fic feels more like the opposite, like the prince's journey is what's important and Sleeping Beauty is what's needed to make him happy. If Sasuke can quit seeing the world in black and white he'll be able to earn Naruto?
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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story... I hope you finish it :)
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will Sasuke be able to get inside the door? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far please update soon please.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Curse yoooouuuuu!!! *shakes fist*
Write more...what happens when Sasuke finally meets Naruto. What will Naruto do....What will Sasuke do...WHAT WILL HAKU DO!!!
KAYAHHHH!!!!! -BOOOOOOM-...that was my brain exploding. =_=
Hugs and Kisses,
Leeana69
Write more...what happens when Sasuke finally meets Naruto. What will Naruto do....What will Sasuke do...WHAT WILL HAKU DO!!!
KAYAHHHH!!!!! -BOOOOOOM-...that was my brain exploding. =_=
Hugs and Kisses,
Leeana69
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope to see updating your fic! I love it so far, plz dont be a unfinished fic.XD!
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you are continuing this story. I love it! Will really be able to kill Naruto once and if he meets him? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good spin on the sleeping beauty story. I like the feal of it with every line I read and your not stressing things to much in each chapter so it makes it a calm flow when reading. Its good that there are also people that are their that also wish for Naruto to be killed that will make Sasuke falling in love with him even better.
Waiting for more...
D-chan
Waiting for more...
D-chan
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack, where's the rest of the story??! Pretty please update soon!!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesing so far!! continue!!