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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story and that small sex scene was pretty good. In addition, I loved the scene between Hinata and Hanabi when they were teasing each other. And Naruto forcibly ramming a stick up Hiashi's ass...that was priceless.
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really Good and I mean it. I like how your going with this and I can't wait to read more. Please keep up the great work! I've been waiting for a good Naruto/Hinata/Hanabi story for a while. So please keep going!
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Enjoy this story, the only representation of hanabi so far that i have found acceptable. Please, continue with as much haste as you can muster ^.^
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, especially if it's one of your firsts! I think Naruto gave in to Hanabi just a little too quickly, but except for that, the characters were all really believable. The back story was pretty entertaining too. Really looking forward to another chapter! Oh yeah, and please don't let Hanabi get anywhere near that fat guy again.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
it's not what i usually preferr, but somehow this is good.
Please, make haste with the rest ^.^
it's not what i usually preferr, but somehow this is good.
Please, make haste with the rest ^.^
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and I like the way that it is going please continue. P.S. We always knew Hiashi-teme was a pain in the ass.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far, look forward to reading more.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... A well-written lemon, an actual plot, and, best of all, NaruHinaHana! I've seen a few before, but they never really got anywhere. I hope you do well with this - so far it's really good. :D Good luck with the next chapter!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good lemon for a beginner. I like the fact that it has a decent plot too. I'm looking forward to your next update, so update soon!