rate_review Reviews

I love this story! Especially where Sasuke told Naruto he loved him and he came back! Thats sooo sweet! Keep it up!

dont be too discouraged. sneakyfox has no life if he/she had the time to type up all that crap. try a less cornier plot next time :)

This was a cute story even with the grammer errors (trust me I understand a thing or two about that). I was just looking at your profile and I give you credit for braving the world of writing; it's gets easier and better with time. Keep up with the editing (I think your other story is turning our fairly well with the editing and detail adding). Anyway I guess I just wanted to throw some encouragement your way. Good luck with all your fics!!