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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! I have no idea why you haven't finished it but I sincerely hope that you do! I love the whole idea of them being mutants. I love that there is a mystery to solve both in the story and for the readers in regards to Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. Good job!
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, nothing to be sorry for XD. I'm really happy that you updated *Hugs u*. I love how you write mysteries XD. And yes, the crime scene was gory, but it wasn't anyone we knew too well in the story, so it was manageable and only added interest, so that's good. The bugs were a really nice touch, my brain is spinning trying to figure out a puzzle with not even half of the pieces :D. I enjoyed the interplay between the boys in this chapter. Love that you snuck in a little bit of sexual tension into the crime scene, lol. But I think that I loved the implications of strong feelings even more. And the visions Sasuke had were cool, strange and intriguing. I'm dying to see where this goes. I Love mystery stories, XD, and you're so very good at them ♥. I'm so excited *HUGS U*.
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back. I had to go back while reading chapter 6. I was really confused because it seems like a totally different story. Makes no references to the Asylum, the loss of Kiba or anything. I'm a little confused but I'll continue on. Although it seems like a different story, I like what this 'new' plot is doing.
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Grabs you and hugs the stuffing out of you* I Love this story and I'm so freaking happy you're continuing it. Time skip huh? 5 years Damn. And 5 years of distance between our boys O.O Poor babies!! *Huggles Sasuke* cause I have no idea what the fuck is wrong with Naruto! This is not what he wants?? Did he hit his head and forget himself?? Wtf? LOL, but meh, I'm sure he has his reasons. I love that they're all grown up now. It's amazingly different. I like the set up. Naruto's still trying to save the world I see XD, Sasuke went into the family business and Sakura became a doctor. Huh, all is right with the world XD, on the surface anyway. Poor Konohamaru *Hugs him too*. I hope you update soon, I'm really dying to know what up. Oh and Hooray for Shika XD, lol, sorry I'm just happy he showed up ♥.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a cool story. i am curious as to what happened to itachi. if naruto ever went back to get oochimaru and kabito. did naruto distance himself from sasuke because of what happened to kiba. i am looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, I love this fic so much!!! Please write a sequel, that'd be fantastic! ;D ~~~
I love all the perspectives & POVs, it's just great how you incorporated other characters and the touch of Gaara at the end was perfectly characterised!!
*gush* Never stopping writing sounds great to me ;D
I love all the perspectives & POVs, it's just great how you incorporated other characters and the touch of Gaara at the end was perfectly characterised!!
*gush* Never stopping writing sounds great to me ;D
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far! Can't wait to se what you have next!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhhhh this just keeps getting better and better. I swear I am so addicted to this story, I totally need to know just what happened to Kiba...surely he can't have just upped and died like that now can he! Plus I wanna see Naruto beat the crap out of Kabuto XD PLEASE!
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kiba's death.. Wow, I didn't see that coming. It was so horrible; I have a bad feeling about it too. He couldn't of just died like that. Kabuto must know something more.
That chapter was a bit creepy (at parts), but still very good. Keep it up.
That chapter was a bit creepy (at parts), but still very good. Keep it up.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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