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for Coffee Mistakes

by Aros

schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very hot. I hope everything is okay between sasuke and naruto after their little talk about Itachi.

Can't wait to read more.
=)
person Jien
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLease update soon!!
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should be proud, that was SMOKING!!! i wasnt a big fan of the chapter before cause i dont like when a whole other chapter is dedicated to the same events as the previous chapter but from a different point of view :S Buuutttt i'm super! happy with this chapter :D surprise smut. what a treat, yay you!
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe.. sex is so much better and a more enjoyable distraction than discussing serious things. Who needs conversation?!
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Oh that was good! Can you say awkward? Oh, lmfao. Please continue!
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow cool I really like the idea of this story looking forward to more.
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah poor Naru-chan! He so lost and doesn't understand!!! Wahhhhh!

Cool story can't wait to read more.
=)
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a disaster. lol some MAJOR explaining needs to take place quickly before sas blows up and murders someone. Really Really want to see where this is gonna go and whats up with itachi molesting naruto like that
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy FUCK! I did not see that one coming.... damn!

I can't wait to find out what happens next!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where's part two? =3 Hehehe, update soon onegai.