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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story so far...please continue it....^___^
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a way to end the first chapter! Spectacular, lol. I was screaming to myself at how hot the second to the last scene was; but then, I wanted to scream at Sasuke for ruining it. I feel like such an ass now, though.
Meh. Naruto is a tad bit too clumsy and naive, duncha`think? Although the attitude does seem to suit him--he's just so cutesy-wootsy, hahah. Asides which, I think Sasuke has a permanent PMS disorder. That's weird, ya`know?
Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style, and this chapter!
Meh. Naruto is a tad bit too clumsy and naive, duncha`think? Although the attitude does seem to suit him--he's just so cutesy-wootsy, hahah. Asides which, I think Sasuke has a permanent PMS disorder. That's weird, ya`know?
Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style, and this chapter!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaa!!!! Update soon!! so cool!!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAAHAHAHAHA!! Itachi, you sly dog you!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooo.. It doesn't matter what reality the story takes place in, Itachi is one evil son of a bitch! :D
Nice chapter. ^^
Nice chapter. ^^
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao Oh no you didn'T! that was friggen awesome!!! I absolutely loved this story!!!!!!!!!