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by chilepie

person animelover
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic! it's like romeo and juliet ... love never meant to be. *sniff sniff*. thanx for sharing!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww... how depressing. :(



Despite the sad ending, it really was a well thought out and executed story. ^^ Keep up the good work!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! NOOOO!!!! Please tell me you're going to put more to this?????
person hmmm
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was good in the begining, but the end was sad. Please keep it going if you like, but personly I would like to read more.
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh... that was sad. Not very often you get to read such a serious Kakashi. And Sasuke asking for the seal at the end... poor guy. So much pressure, so little time, huh. Will there be more?
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. Poor sasuke and naruto. Awesome story. It would be neat if you did a sequal and had a time skip to when Sasuke and Naruto are older. Like after the manga time skip and had Sasuke accidently break the seal and remember. Then like go after Naruto and take him away from the village so they could be together.

Just an idea. I think it would be cool. Either way this was an awesome story.
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