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person Emily
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so hott, one of the best I've read in a while.
person OJ
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update plz
person Pickles
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Geeze that was hawt!
person Pickles
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uber HAWT!

OMFG
person BlackButtefly
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn Kakashi is such a crazy animal...=)
person morosan
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* ffuuuuuuuu..... i'm in love...... *blush*
I've always liked kakashi and now you make him more of a beast than I could ever imagine and it's just sooo sexy.... in "all other" stories he's a little to... porn-porn-porn....like....
but now he's more like an alpha-wolf.... Love this side of him.
especially in the end.
kakashi: "Yes again. and again and again until you can't walk" (this sounds so... evil, somehow. and then te kille line that makes you melt and shows a caring man beneth his feral exterior) "And then i will carry you"
omg! my heart just melted....
thank you so much for writing this story. it has fulfilled my night. ^^
*hugs*
//Moro-san
person Hen
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! But it really wasn't Naruto's fault what happened. Kakashi shouldn't have been so mad.
person moodymel
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was really great! My favorite pairing in Sakura/Kakashi and this story did not disappoint. The added part with Naruto and Lee was really good too.