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for Daylight

by Raina

person Telpei
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, this was written so beautifully! I love how Sasuke turned away for just a moment at the window, and then when he looked back Naruto was right there. I also liked the lack of dialogue, it gave the story a more serene, peaceful feel. Words simply aren't needed between these two sometimes. I just hope Sasuke realizes that one day, he won't be able to walk away :P Great story! I really enjoyed it :)
person cynaga
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Really satisfying emotionally to read.
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well done. I was listening to Micky Green's song, "Oh," while I read this fic and it was perfect. So haunting. Perfect oneshot.
person beautifullove348
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just so beautiful! It made me sad. I cried a little.

Please make a sequel?:)
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool. I like the ending.
=)