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for Iruka's Problem

by Hestia

schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was hilarious, as was Shino's Problem, to a lesser degree, which I read after this one. Angsty in a mellow way (yes, it's possible!) and the fact that Ibiki has such a -deep- interest in Iruka's affairs... and the red kitty food bowl! And... and the four (soon to be six) ANBU members lying in wait outside of Iruka's window... barely waiting for the bowl to emerge before pouncing, like a bull to a red banner... Pure GENIUS.

I hope you'll continue this series with more fun, hot, and sweet episodes, and as always, thanks for writing!
person Ashcat
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... I really really like this! I love the dichotomy you've given Iruka here :) the wanton slut meets the proper school teacher. Gah i hope there are more chapters <3 this totally rocks :D
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I love this pairing!
as much as Iruka and Kakashi. sweet love story:)
who knew rising out of a kitchen floor could be so much fun!
but part of me would have like to read the slutty, slutty fuck every anbu version.
hint, hint and Happy Holidays
person Allys
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow goddess lady. That was amazing XD, as usual *loves all over you*I really don't know what to say past it XD. It was ridiculously hott - loved how you describe Yamato, his face, his body, his taste :). And Iruka, and Ibiki, LOL, the entire situation was intriguing and fantastic. Thank you for this. It was wonderful *Hugs*
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
This is just... it's SMOKING hot, and I love it, but it's also silly funny... flirting through chakra signatures, and Iruka glaring at that silly little cat bowl. Tenzou is just as CUTE as he should be.... really, he's just adorable and deferential and kickass at the same time. Yamato/Tenzou and Iruka is one of my favorite pairings- right along with IruKakaIru and the threesomes. :3

I loved reading this and now I'm going to pounce GLEEFULLY (GLEEFULLY, I TELL YOU) onto Shino's problem, like the voyeur I am. ♥
person Inigeshi
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love. and i love the landlady how nice of her to turn away untimely visitors.
person gazelovr
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Just the quality fic I've come to expect from such a great author such as yourself. Although I'm eagerly awaiting new chapters for D/s I'm glad to see that you're still writing new stories. I'm really glad that that Neko-chan was Neko-chan and not just some twist on Kakashi doing a jutsu to conceal his identity. Not that I don't love them together but it nice to see it mixed up a bit. I guess maybe I should thank Kristal as well if she was the inspiration. I'm also really glad that you didn't make it have sad ending. Not much good at reviews but please just know that I love your writing and please keep up your hard work!! Have a Happy Holiday Season!!
person purplelev
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm was so happy to see an update from you, great work as always. I love the idea behind this story Ibiki as the Konoha matchmaker and I love this line "Dear fucking god! Horny, gay ANBU nins were flirting with him!". I can't wait for your next post.
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Falls to the floor with cardiac arrests* Call 911... please!!!!! I am dying from blood loss!! Man, that was hot!!! Gawd! I love it!! I am actually speechless! Sugoi!!! Beautifully crafted! You should be proud of yourself! Nyah! *dies*
person llyoung
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love that Iruka ended up with his Neko-chan but now Ibiki needs someone else for his ANBU.