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for Iruka's Problem

by Hestia

schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh! how I love your stories. you never dissapoint me ^__^ thank you for this one. mmm.. I loved it, so hot. =)
person Jien
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still wanna know who neko chan is..
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was puuurfect! I don’t know how many times this story made me laugh out loud! I loved how you described Tenzo/Yamato without having to mention his name – the green and red cat mask, his woodsy smell and taste. And I laughed at how you used feline analogies -- the cat bowl, initially meant for feeding strays, now used for drawing in other types of horny “tom cats”. And that scene when Iruka scanned with his charkra just to find “in-heat” ANBU practically growling in the dark waiting for his signal! I could almost hear their sex-hungry meows just waiting to pounce Iruka’s bones! I wouldn’t be surprised if they were able to SMELL Iruka in the air when he was masturbated. But the clincher was “Neko-chan’s” I’m ready to be domesticated” admission.

I am kinda curious though – what happened to the other ANBU – or did they just missed out?
person ZeldaFitz
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I think... I just burst into flames! O.O

I love this pairing. I do feel bad for the other ANBU, though. They need love, too.

The cat references were clever, as were the hints to Tenzou's identity. Awesome job. XD
person Hen
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a really great story. Bonus points for the unusual pairing.
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*needs a cold shower* Great story, well told, very hot Iruka in this one. Can this be a series? Now that Iruka's taken, will someone else get the red catbowl? Well, sorry, I'm just greedy 'cause this was great. Many thanks!
person cynaga
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, {{{Hestia}}} - I should of known this was you. Delicious!