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I don't really know why, but Sakura's mom annoys me. Maybe when I was around that age and I asked my mom something she would tell me the truth... I don't know, but it seems to be that her Mother is keeping he ignorant of the truth.

I'm a big fan of this pairing - I was a little skeptical at first because Sakura's 13 in this story, but I loved every chapter of this. It's now been bookmarked :D I hope you maybe get ideas for a sequel!

Hey there!

I know this fic is finished,
and I realise there probably won't be a sequel to it,
or an epilogue, or another chapter,
but that won't stop me from trying to convince you otherwise!

This story's piqued my interest, because you 'crossed a line' most people wouldn't dare dream of crossing,
yet you handled it perfectly, professionally, and you got me somewhat addicted.
I saw the story, and nearly passed it, but then something made me click it.
I'm glad I did.

I agree with your statement in the first chapter,
in real life it'd be horrid, yet I love this story about it.
I guess we're all (a little bit?) perverted, aren't we? :)

I'll stop my ranting now,
I'm getting the feeling nothing good will come of it,
if I keep this rambing up,
but I'd love to know what I need to do to get you to write some more smut,
perhaps how Sakura and Kakashi move on from here,
how they keep it a secret (do they?),
what happens when Sakura finds out exactly what that 'itch' means,
and the aftermath (sp?) from that.

I hope I've given you something to chew on,
and I also hope I've set off a chain of thoughts,
and that you'll 'suddenly' feel the inexplicable urge to write some more... :P

It's not a demand, or an order,
just a plead...

x

~muts

Jeely Cly, that was... hot. It's something that could have been a PWP as well as something that could be blown up into a multi-chapter saga sometime if you wanted, too. I'm sure lots of Members would adore it if you did blow it up and detail the NaruSasu/SasuNaru-ness and the surrounding scandals of everyone's antics. Hell, it could end up angsty or WAFF... hmmm, maybe I should go write something myself...lol.

Anywhose, There's a vast difference between enjoying reading or writing a Story like this and endorsing child molestation or pornography. This site is about freedom of expression, and to my knowledge, there's no law against expressing your fantasies through art. Especially in an adult-only forum.

So, I love this Story, and hope you fill this site with a bajillion more like it.

-- DeeDubbya

That was such an incredibly -- I don't know what to say! I can't think of the word. I'll tell you this much, you've made me really like KakaSaku. Hehe. Awesome work!

Next chapter, yes please? Just.. wow. I do hope you bring us the fourth soon! Please?

nooooNO! Don't go this story is too unique,great,awesome,cool,all the amazing adjectives in the world to stop this. I hope everyone thinks so too. so you can continue its freakin amazing. I think its great plot like I said before this is minor but not extreme at all by 13 I knew about sex and stuff so I think this is just fine.please update again even if just a few more chappies I think it's too hellva wow to end at what 4 chapters no way it needs to keep going it'll be a class A crime if not lol

Hope you decide to do it!

Loves Arry

Oy, Oy, you should make a sequel to this. I know it's wrong, but it was really, really, hot. The sequel should be set when she is older, perhaps 16+.

You take requests? How about a Naruto/Hinata/Kiba fic? I've only seen one and it was an AU.

Excellent story, very well written. Wow. By far the best, KakaxSaku story I've come by thus far. Great description and you really have a nice way of writing the emotion of the characters. I feel this story is perfect the way it is, ending included and all. If you want to write a sequel that's fine, up to you, but I can't think of a better way to end the story than you did. One thing's for sure though, this shouldn't be the last Naruto fic you ever write!!!

Hope to be seeing more of your work some time in the future~

Happy Holidays. Great Read. :D