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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a brilliant story. You somehow managed to incorporate the innocence of a young girl with the needs they feel. I fel sick at the raping part and I'm sure it must have been difficult for you to write too. But yeah, great job!
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I wasn't very happy with chapter 3, but Chapter 4 was great! I do hope that you do continue this story or at least to a sequel. I would definately love to read more.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know... I was thinking about it, and I'd really like to read a follow up sequel one-shot mini story of the awkward encounter the following morning when Team 7 all meet up. Naruto despertly wanting to know what happened to Sakura that she never came back, yet trying to keep what happened between him and Sasuke secret. Sasuke despertly hoping Naruto won't reveal their *ahem* friendly spars. Naruto begins to ask whats that on her neck - only to be cut off by Kakashi replying "What's that on yours?"
Intense blushing by all teens. Smug Kakashi. And awkward silences the whole walk home. =^^= hehehehe
(Or not. Still loved the story though. <3)
Intense blushing by all teens. Smug Kakashi. And awkward silences the whole walk home. =^^= hehehehe
(Or not. Still loved the story though. <3)
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really into underage fanfics but I must admit that this story was pretty darn good. I've always liked this pairing and the way you make Sakura's sexual journey as something very natural made this story easy to digest. Good work!
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No... you can't end such a great story like this so soon, you should make it longer.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very touching, and great with all of the scenes. You have a real mastery of the scenes. I especially like the scenes where she slowly expresses her desires to Kakashi. It's not like me. I was a damned fast hussy when I was 13. But I love the story and I love the way that you write it. Bravo!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh.. you`re good! ^__^
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even thoug I agree with you on your views, this is a very well written story. Keep going
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW this was awesome I love how you have this story set up so detailed and just wow. I hope you don't end it you could make this into a story if you wanted to I really liked it. can't wait for the final sex scene but I hope you consider into making this into a full out story
it would be unique and different than all the rest so you should for sure. Great job!
Loves Arry
it would be unique and different than all the rest so you should for sure. Great job!
Loves Arry
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa this story is HOT...Great job thanks for writing and posting it I can't wait to read more.