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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was too short and is too wide for theaverage computer stcreen in use.
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice work hehe can't wait for the next ch
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You need to fix the grammer other than that it's interesting and I would enjoy more. Thank you.
Good luck, best wishes, and blessed be.
Butterfly Beauty
Good luck, best wishes, and blessed be.
Butterfly Beauty
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I`m not so sure how this will work, I mean they all tried to kill each other numerous times, sso.. it might be interesting how you will continue and which part they will play in the HP story. This could be the beginning of something good, but we`ll only know if you`ll update this story , so please do. Ojh and another thing.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I'd like to read more.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it update soon
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it shows potential. It's hard to give more detailed review yet, as there are only two chaps... I hope that you update soon...
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be coming along well.Hope you post more chapters soon.
I definitly want to see what's going to happen next.
I definitly want to see what's going to happen next.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like HP crossover as much as the next person, so I'll read more if you post more. Kinda hard to tell where you're going from this beginning, but I have faith. Go forth, dear writer and amaze me.