rate_review Reviews

Absolutely nice story. He's so much in denial.
Stupid Sakura for not realizing that.

Naruto leave on a mission for a while XD... (PLEASE?) WILL BE WAITING NEXT CHAPT. ;)

I went back to reread this to see if I could get an idea to suggest to you. Here goes:

Given the fact that Sasuke went behind Naruto's back and seduced and knowingly impregnanted the woman that Naruto adored, any child between that pink haired terror and the Uchiha would be a living reminder of the betrayal of his best friend and the girl he loved. Honestly, the way this is set up right now, a triad wouldn't work and I don't know if you had that planned. I do think that Naruto should pull away, maybe have Tsunade send him on missions. When Naruto gets back, finds out Sakura miscarried but he can't find it within him to feel bad for either. Heart is going to be cold and sore for a long time. You don't love someone for THAT long and get over it fast.

Resolution - once the boys hook up and there's outcry about an heir to the clan, Naruto and Sasuke agree to a surrogate but NOT Sakura.

Just a thought!

It seems to be unanimous regarding the birth or rather non-birth of the possible Uchiha heir by Sakura. I agree with Lady Laran’s review the most, when it comes to the outcome.

I hope that you make it very difficult for Sasuke to earn back the friendship. I have a hard time enjoying stories that have Sasuke cheating on Naruto in one way or another and then it all gets forgiven so easily. Real life is not like that or at least it shouldn’t be.

I think he (Naruto) needs to disappear for a while and when he is rediscovered it should still take a long time to turn things around. Life and death situation, I don’t know, I just think it would take something major for me to be able to forgive someone that type of transgression, but them I proudly hold grudges.

Maybe hook Naruto up with someone else in the meantime and Sasuke can see were his greed and selfishness has cost him.

Anyways, I really enjoyed your first chapter and look forward to reading more. Very much so!

OMG it's soooo good. It's so sad but at
the same time I can't get myself to stop reading.
I got to have more of this drama. Gods this is
the best I've read in ages. Good work.

wow nice chapter I loved it... and you have to admit Sasuke got that comming the baka.... about suggestions I was thinking... hmmm Naruto's an ANBU too right? then he can be in a coma after a mission or so... I mean he was so distracted within himself that he became careless and while saving the team he himself put in danger... you know the drill
OR you can make him a hunter-nin, they if I'm not mistaken get they data and existance erased from Konoha (paper-wise) until they retire (in which case they will have another name and identity) or their leader deems so...

gomen for double reviewing heheh but That was sly of Naruto telling Teuchi (sp?) about how wonderful Sakura was before the breakup.. there will be people who will look at Sakura with bad eyes... heheh quite sly of Naruto

You know, the wonderful thing about being a writer...punishment can come in spades. Sasuke wanted Naruto AND his heirs? Seems like either a false pregnancy or a problem with Sakura and she can't carry children full term. I don't think it'd be right for Sasuke to EVENTUALLY win Naruto and Naru-chan have to see the reminder of his pain allt he time. That and payback needs to be a bitch and a half.

wow, amazingly done, so sad though :(
hmm ideas...well there could be a scare about naruto being late coming back from a mission as if maybe he let himself get killed or something and sakura and sasuke could be worried then try and see if he's ok when he does return but be turned away, i dunno, i think it is best to wait a while after the break up, grr sasuke is such an asshole and sakuras such a whory bitch, fits their personalities but sucks lol, interested to see how u have sasuke try and gain the friendship back, seems impossible, so please update as soon as possible u really got me thinking of this one

This chapter was so sad!!! I loved how you had Naruto treat Sasuke though!! But I wish he really would see that Sakura is just as much to blame and Naruto himself already knew from when they were all first a team, that Sakura loved Sasuke and always would. I think Naruto needs to be sent on a long mission, maybe he should request that himself so that he can have time to get over the betrayal and to try to mend his heart. And Sasuke needs to learn that what he did was horrible and that he has a lot to make up for if he wants to be with Naruto. I really like this story and look forward to you writing more!