AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Immolation

by UbakeNeko

person too lazy to log in
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh? So it wasn't you when Immolation was posted on fanfiction.net? I thought it was kinda bold for you in posting it back there with the whole more strict thing. Have you tried pushing the 'Report for Abuse' thing at the end of it? If it was me, I'd just copy and paste Flames to that fic repeatedly or report for abuse many times...
person roxnroll
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I've read this before. I liked it then too. I think it would be cool to continue it.

Rox
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story/ oneshot as I adore NaruSaku pairings. It's a damn shame that someone had to freaking plagerise ( I know it's not the correct spelling, but I honestly forgot. ^^;) your good work, and yes it is good. I hope to see more stuff from you soon. Don't let the copy-cat dunderheads get you down!

person REM1985
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this was a really good start to some great smut. I would say that you should continue it but I know how hard it can be to write something if it doesn't just come to you. If you feel the itch to make another chapter I will be watching for it. Thanks
person Anime Baka
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember Before, and that was a tease! I would really like to see this fic continue! The curse of my NaruSaku addiction....
person Sanity
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story was, as has been said before, HOT. I'm also of the opinion that this one is well-suited to the one-shot listing. It stands beautifully on its own - to be honest, I think another chapter might put a damper on things. But this was incredibly fun to read, regardless of whether or not you still want to add to it.
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Please continue it.
person Lunar84
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT! And it was NaruSaku! So i love it already. It was written amazingly and if you wanted it could be left alone as a one-shot. Though I really hope it isn't. It has potential to develop into something more. Please update when you have a chance if you decide to continue!
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good short. Because of where you stopped, you should leave it as a short, otherwise it would break the flow of this lovely little piece of smutty fun you have. I could, however, see you doing a chapter that dealt with them two weeks down the road. You know Sakura would be completely hooked at that point. kukukuku
person roxnroll
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty steamy. I say continue it.
Rox