rate_review Reviews

okay it make more sense now. Very cool and moving.
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I actually read this last night right before I was about to hit the sac. I had a sneaking suspision that this was a Gaara and Naruto (I know most people say Gaara has teal eyes and he does but I have seen Kishimoto draw variations of his eye color. I liked the poem, nice work.

Sad poem. You might not get a very good response from this poem because you put it in with the stories. Although I have seen poems in here before. The only thing is, is this even apart of Naruto? Does it have any characters in it. Like which Character lost the loved one? Was it Sasuke or who? Who was the lost one? If I had to guess I'd say Naruto from all the smiling and blue eyes. It's a very good poem, but you just didn't relate it to the Naruto world very well.

Sorry if that sounds mean, I'm not trying to be. Don't hurt me! That's just what I think.

Anyway like I said before very lovely poem.
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I'm confused on who the pairing is because you put this in the Male/Male section. I could have sworn it was Sasuke until you said Green eyes... The only character in naruto with green eyes i know of that would have feeling for naruto is Sakura. So maybe this should be in Het but if its Sasuke or Sakura it doesn't matter because the poem itself is really good. Maybe you should put it in some context though cuz its hard to link with naruto other then the fact that its in this section.

Hope that helps, other wise this is a great look into a lost love,

Lokivsanubis :D

thi is so sweet *tears* i loved it.

-tackle glomps- *I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooves it!!* Very sweet and sad!! -tears slightly- but sooo good!!!