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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!!
Please make another chapter!!! I'm begging you!!! :3
Please make another chapter!!! I'm begging you!!! :3
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! This was totally HAWT. Plz you must write the next part. I wanna know the rest of this steamy threesome!!!
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hurry with chapter 4 and however many more after that because that was like a an aphrodisiac in a whore house! I nearly lost my mind!
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you want some "inspiration"? go read lemon drops fics. BEST DAMN YAOI LEMONS EVER!!!!!
im a total yaoi fangirl, i know what im talking about!! by the way, love this fic. i usually totally HATE het as a main pairing, so you should be proud..........(mumbles)i don't even like naruhina......ARG.......IDON'TWANNABECONVERTED!!!!!!!
im a total yaoi fangirl, i know what im talking about!! by the way, love this fic. i usually totally HATE het as a main pairing, so you should be proud..........(mumbles)i don't even like naruhina......ARG.......IDON'TWANNABECONVERTED!!!!!!!
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, it's just getting better! You don't have to do hardcoe yaoi, if that's too difficult, I've also wrote yaoi stories before and it wasn't very easy. But good luck! :)
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was intense. Normally i skip over hetero scenes too. ^^;; But yours was well written. didn't mind it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I think you'll do great. ^.~
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next. Yes, I thank you should make this a full fic. I can't wait to read your next update. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more than a two shot
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please turn this into a full fic insteasd of just a two-shot. I'm enjoying it very much so.