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by hatochan

person hato-chan
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
anise... still there? *hopes beyond hope* email me please!!!! *luvs on you*

hato-chan@hotmail.com
person Anise
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*pokes* hello... you still out there somewhere ^_^
Now I know I've already read and reviewed (although it never hurts to reread) but this is more because I'm wondering what your up to, it seems like forever since we've heard from you. I just wanted to let you know that I miss your writing and more importantly you, your emails always make me smile :) I hope the reason we haven't heard much from you lately is because your busy with lots of wonderful things going on and everything is well on your end, miss ya hun! *snugsu*
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just rereading this- HEE. Still SUCH a horny puppy. :D <3

....also, dare I ask what happened the last time Kakashi went without underwear?
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What an orgasmicly sweet ending. XD I loved it! It was sooo awesome. ^o^ This is so going into my Recommended Reading. ^.~ Great job! -gives you plenty of cookies and milk- hmm... -throws in a jar of pickles- Yes, i love you that much now. XD Cookies and pickles! Two of the greatest snacks in the world!
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH... OH... THAT WAS SO WORTH IT... SO HOT... *BLUSHES AND HIDES*
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily and wurbles*
You and Fuyu have this ASTOUNDING ability to make brain-searing asphalt-melting smut be warm and fuzzy and loving at the same time. And it IS brain-searing asphalt-melting smut! I mean.. wow. XD Rowr, even!

The pair of them are adorable and sexy and kinky as shit together... and also adorable. Kakashi's stream of consciousness was funny, especially when he was thinking about his future manicure (XD!) and the "well, that was unprofessional" moment. It's exactly the sort of red herring active and intelligent brains throw out in moments like these. Moments like anything, actually.

How is it he can do this to me with a piece of candy, a few straps, and the misuse of medical instruments?
*bubbles with laughter* Question, answer!

SUCH a good job, lady, and I'm just delighted to death to have read it!
person fyrbyrd
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that was damn good. And I have to go to sleep after reading too!!!! Boy what kind of dreams am I going to have?
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I....gah...that....gerk......haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwttttttttt
::THUD::
[EMS rush into room]
Medic: Crash cart! Crash cart! [rubs paddles together as they charge then puts them to reader's chest] CLEAR!!!
::SHOCK::
AGAIN! CLEAR!!
::SHOCK::
WE'RE LOOSING THE PATIENT #%^!$^%^#$!!!!!.................
What the hell is with the dopey grin?
person Anise
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kind of liked how through most of the story everything was very controlled and then at the end they just completely let go, there's no more playing it's just the two of them feeling, it was very hot!
I'm beginning to think that I never leave any kind of constructive review it's just rambling about how fabulous you are but of course as long as you don't mind that's just what I'll continue doing ^_^
person guitarguy314
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please! O_O...i love this story