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for Goodbyes Paid Forward

by inediblefrogs

schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is great i cant wait for the next chapter. keep up the excellent work.
person RyuEarth
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this! even though it is so sad! =/
thanks for writing it, and i can't wait to see what will happen next! ^^
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Always a great storyline!
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH! What an ending! (unless you write more--which I'm all for, by the way)
I just read your entire story (including the parts by others), and it was amazing (I've only seen one other epic like this to beat it).
You have great voice, it especially shows through Kotetsu (his language is just so...creative, lol). And, if this is the ending, I absolutely love it. I really don't think that Kakashi could ever make up his mind, so he'll end up doing nothing.
The way you wrote Sai's character was just so cute (his way of acting and speaking, not the angsting). And, though I agree with Kotetsu and Yamato's view of Sasuke, the way you wrote him was wonderful too (no matter how much I dislike him, he continues to grow on me).
You've convinced me to get a Y! account...that'll be what I do the next time I log on.
Thank you very much for your work. I don't have many fanfictions myself...but I have many Naruto vids on Youtube under this same name (Joslin1). Your sharing this saga, makes me want to share something too..if that makes any since.
XD
person purplelv
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you develop and these characters and their relationships. I can't wait to see where things go from here.
person anon.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww... this chapter almost made me cry T.T
pweeeeeeease get those two together :[
it wouldn't be right if they didn't... D=
person Anise
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Despite the fact that I like Kakashi and Iruka together I'm glad Iruka finally got up the nerve to do that-good for him! Now I'm curious to see how this unfolds because I'm sure everyone wants them to be together but who knows if Kakashi can or is ready to do that and maybe Iruka deserves someone else, but whatever happens I can't wait to see how this all plays out! :) Also I liked getting some of Iruka's background and seeing that this isn't about him being a prude he's just moved past all of this stuff, it's such a good story I can't wait for the next update ^_^
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. I don't know if Iruka would be better off with Kakashi or not. They're all such a mess. Wonderful writing. *hugs Iruka* I'm sure the fourth chapter will be worth waiting for. :)
person dkf
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well...I'm happy for Iruka that he could tell him that, even though I have a feeling Iruka wont be for a long time...
person KorikumoStereo
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah. amazing. you're a genius. you and penbrydd should write a fic together :]
it'd be so godly that people would have to fast and pray for thirty days before reading it,
and it would still be totally worth it :D