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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this series... or at least start another. Thank you for a great story!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is intense. I can't wait to see how Sasuke fits into all this.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! 'Kotetsu has great instincts with all things cock.' That line was priceless. I laughed so hard I fell out of my chair! (no rally I did, I have to be the world's clumsiest person.) Anyway... this update really made my day. It had been totally crappy up until this point! But now I'm in a much better mood! Much love and update soon.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, can you tell I worked 15 mother fuckin' hours today? I'm sorry for the downgrade in my spelling/proof-reading ability in my last review. Oh yea, any your story's still great. Rock on!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens with Iruka and Kakashi.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking great. I feel so bad for Iruka but I know you will make it up to him some how. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wait wait wait wait! You can't just leave me hanging there! Oh, curse you, Shikyaku! What happens to poor Iruka, what's going to happen with Kakashi? Gah!
On another note, I'm so glad this chapter came out! And I got to re-read the first chapter of this, which makes me snidely snicker to myself- buttsex sensei, and "spread wide for the chuunin syrup master" indeed. And this, "There is nothing you could tell me right now that would be freakier than the fact that Morino Ibiki popped by this apartment with low-cal beverages, in the vain hopes of having a heart-to-heart talk with you." You can almost hear his mind boggle. I also absolutely adore all the epitaphs Kotetsu comes up for for different people; "sunshine shinobi", "King of Torture and Mind-Fuckery" "Princess Sasuke/ass-clown"- I'd love to see you get ticked off at someone, in real life, just to see what interesting new and degrading insults you would come up with.
~Limonata
P.S. I found you a typo in chapter one..."No." Iruka's voice reflected the regret in Kotetsu's eyes" (talking about the sad lack of video footage)- you want Izumo, I'm sure of it!
On another note, I'm so glad this chapter came out! And I got to re-read the first chapter of this, which makes me snidely snicker to myself- buttsex sensei, and "spread wide for the chuunin syrup master" indeed. And this, "There is nothing you could tell me right now that would be freakier than the fact that Morino Ibiki popped by this apartment with low-cal beverages, in the vain hopes of having a heart-to-heart talk with you." You can almost hear his mind boggle. I also absolutely adore all the epitaphs Kotetsu comes up for for different people; "sunshine shinobi", "King of Torture and Mind-Fuckery" "Princess Sasuke/ass-clown"- I'd love to see you get ticked off at someone, in real life, just to see what interesting new and degrading insults you would come up with.
~Limonata
P.S. I found you a typo in chapter one..."No." Iruka's voice reflected the regret in Kotetsu's eyes" (talking about the sad lack of video footage)- you want Izumo, I'm sure of it!
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... hot and emotionally-yummy. And also kind of funny- oh, Kotetsu. XD Only the porniest of ninja masters can turn cockblocking into sage relationship advice. XD
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Oh, my god!!! Kakashi's lost Sasuke and Iruka's heading over to fuck him--well, that will sure be a WTF moment for Kakashi!!!
And oh my god, Kotetsu and Izumo--oh, man, wow, that's complicated!
Gosh this will be remembered as the "cockblock chapter!"
And oh my god, Kotetsu and Izumo--oh, man, wow, that's complicated!
Gosh this will be remembered as the "cockblock chapter!"
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are awsome! I just wanted to tell you. I can't wait to see what happens next... I think Iruka needs to tie Kakashi to the bed, make him beg for it and tell him he needs to take off his mask.... Um but that's just me.
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