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for Goodbyes Paid Forward

by inediblefrogs

person llyoung
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved Izumo's and Iruka's conversation where Izumo explained the exclusivity of his and Ko's relationship. Loved the sex and loved what Ko said to Iruka. Now Iruka go get Kakashi.
person Mila
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was... hot ^^
I really loved it x3

I will look for some other stories of yours now :)
person Kattmad
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xoxoxoxo

OMGorshies...you sneaky little sweetie, you posted here without any help from me.

YOU...YOU made my birthday enjoyable! I LUFF YOU! Thank you for bringing Kotetsu home to Izumo
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see another post from you. Your writing is not only sexy cause of the whole PWP thing but it's alos incredibly believable of the characters and emotionally pact. I can't wait for the next chapter. Ohh is the "Emotion" story part of the time line or just a similar story inspired by yours?
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this is a beautifully tangled trainwreck... it's going to be interesting to see how you untangle (or entangle) this.
person cynaga
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Hell. yeah" Great story!
person Anise
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading through your stories and you write these guys so completely and utterly kinky, which of course makes for very steamy smut! You do seem to like torturing Iruka and Sasuke, I'm beginning to think that they should just get together get themselves out of this mess and forget everyone else. I admit I suggest that because I like the iru/sas pairing and almost no one writes it but on the other hand they could be good for each other, plus I like how your being different you haven't just gone and paired Sasuke up with Naruto right away which seems to be what everyone does. I'm should stop right there before I start to ramble on and I'm sure you already have your ideas of what's going to happen to these guys, who knows maybe you will have Sasuke and Naruto together. I do look forward to what happens next these stories are so well written, it's amazing how something that seems to be all porn could be so heartbreaking and emotional. Anyways I've enjoyed reading all the stories and look forward to the next update :)
person llyoung
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"You taught Ibiki how to screw Kakashi, while you laid Kakashi's boyfriend, Iruka. Are you sure this isn't something you dreamed? Hell, are you sure this isn't something I dreamed?"
Loved that passage. Wonderful story. I love these two together.
Looking forward to the next chapter.