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for Izumo's Problem

by Hestia

person Word_Slave
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm reviewing again... I always review and then the story sticks in my mind.... Is that good??? I'm not certain. But I have to say, I kinda wish that K hadn't done all that to him in front of the others even though he wanted to claim him. After all, I'm surprised he wanted to share that much.. oh well, I suppose that just shows my vanilla-ness doesn't it??
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person Ivy
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last few chapters are so hot ^_^ You are truly one of the best writers on this site! Look foward to more!
person gingitsune
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Another chapter!!! I got to tell you that I love your entire series!!!! I still have no idea why all of them are at Kurohyou's apt but I guess you will tell us in your own time. :D Oh!!!! And Kurohyou had accepted Izumo's love! Yaya!!! More onegai? :D
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was so amazing I don't know where to begin. It figures that Kurohyou would be one of Danzou's. That man screwed up so many kids. Explains why Kuro can't bottom. *wince*

Ibiki handled things the best he could, all things considered. I love that Kuro is showing emotion, and Kotetsu is hilarious. Raccoon is perfect for him. This just gets better and better with each chapter. I can't wait for Raccoon and Kotetsu to get sorted out, and for the next scene with Kuro and Izumo, of course. ^_^
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Purrs with pleasure* That felt like a wedding ceremony! I love that panther so much!!! Nyah!!! I laughed and moaned along with the rest... I was so happy to see that update! ^.^ Great job at putting red head on his place! LOL
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a chapter filled with emotion...and sexy panthers^^
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! New chapters! I suggest Genma and Sai for future cat bowls, but I's like to see more of Kotetsu and the racoon first :-)
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*guh*
*iz brainded*
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Okay, better now. That on-off impromptu collaring ceremony was beautful and intense. Wow.
Enough to make me stop giggling at PARTAY IN KUROHYOU'S APARTMENT- BRING FURNITURE and have the brain go "fzzt."
Well, along with every character in the room. That silence was the sound of mental gears frying.

...party in Kurohyou's apartment was hilarious, btw. ANBU cast reunion slash decorating party. XD I'm wondering if somebody brought chips and beer, and someone else called out for pizza.
The territorial kunai-flinging and beating of Shu-the-Raccoon was appropriate. ^^ I liked how IRRITATING it was that Shu just lay there- of course it's no fun to kick somebody who just takes it, no matter HOW much the bastard deserves it.
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL... LOL... that was so much fun!!! IBIKI's Problem!!! That would be interesting! Finally finding his libido! Great Idea! intriguing to say the least, to find the great mind himself suddenly under the onslaught of his own desires... YEah! go for it! as always you do not fail to deliver! Happy kitten!!! *purrs with satisfaction* smut and non smut is sooooo good!!!! nyah!!!!