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for Izumo's Problem

by Hestia

person naracest
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gasp! Oh no!!!! He's got a problem alright! Oooooh what's going to happen to panther-san? Who i love as an OC by the by. Soooooo hot. Soooooo sweet. Soooooo sexy. Pants. Did i mention sexy? Well yeah. Very very sexy!!!!!! God i can't wait to read more! I was supposed to be writing today but that's out the window now!!!!
Cheers
Meg
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to pass out, I think my heart just stopped!

Your stories are so hot! I held my breath until I thought I'd pass out, laughed until I cried and tried my best not to 'leave a mess' in my chair! I can't stop reading them again and again!

Damn your character Kurohyou is hot, you created a character almost as good as Ibiki! Too bad he's 'taken', I would've loved to see him paired with Kiba or Naruto for a little fun... would've been vicious and seriously hot!

person hatorissexbitch
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you should soooo have him give somebody like kiba or sasuke a cat bowl. how funny would it be to give sasuke a catbowl?
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SHIKA! GIVE SHIKA THE BOWL! Shika is my absolute favorite character! CUMMON! PLEASE! I've read ALL your stories and I'm a HUGE fan! I LOVE YOUR WORK!

xXxHyuugaNejixXx

P.S. GIVE SHIKA THE BOWL!
person llyoung
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ending to Izumo's Problem. I loved Kuro's laughing.
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ending but what about Kotetsu and Shu? You kind of just left them hanging. Maybe you coultd tack on something that wraps them up too. It'd be wonderful if they worked out but in any case that part of the story is just not finished. However the rest of it was great! Well written and it flowed nicely. I really liked the change of emotion you have in there and I have to say that I was rooting for the your original characters and their lovers. Including the redhead, I really liked him. Anyway thumbs up on the story as a whole.
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THe end? The end? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not yet!!!! What about Shu-chan, Ibiki, Kakashi and stupid Tetsu? Nyahhhhh!!!!!!!
Though... that ending was so beautiful it brought tears to my kitty eyes... *sighs* I loved it!! it was purrfect!!! Nyah!!!! *licks* Well done!! nyah! You can be proud of yourself (not that you are not already... you wonderful writer you!) ^.^ Blame the time... incoherent ramblings!
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Applause* That was a wonderful ending to a wonderfully exciting and sexy story. *Standing ovation* I'm glad that Izumo got this perfect ending with the perfect man for him. I feel a little bad for Kotetsu. Is he going to come off his high horse and beg shu for what he knows he needs? And poor Ibiki. With his newly awakened sexual desire...i have no idea how that's going to turn out. I'm just going to eagerly awaiting the next installment in the 'problem' series along with the rest of the world. Btw...is D/s going to be updated soon? That fic just owns me. Love you ^_^
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wibble eyes*
Oh GOD, that's so beautiful. Just.... *sniff* YEEEEEEE SO HAPPY, They're so happy and that makes me so happy... YEEE. ♥
Thank you, Hestia, for such a sweet love story. ^-^ So sweet.... *happy, happy sigh and goes to read again*
person Word_Slave
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Thank you!!! I can't wait for the sequel!!!! Not that you have a life or anything... but um, (blushing here) but you know, you should drop all that and give us more Shu. Okay... sorry... life goes on. Thanks for your postings.
Slave