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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The way you ended it was so sweet! I'm glad you'll write a fic focused on Shu :-) Ibiki's problem would be good too...I wonder who you'll pair him with. Anyways Izumo's story was my favorite of this series so far.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I fucking love this story! Wonderfully creative and with some of my favorite older nins! I hope you fix Ibiki up nicely though... anyway wonderful smut and great BSDM scenes, they were so hot you re-heated my coffee! Anywhoozle I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chappie.
love
Dani
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Dani
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmmmmm is right. Izumo and Kurohyou are SO nummy.
...and Kotetsu is a walking trainwreck, dear God. 9_9 I mean, DEAR GOD. He couldn't have fucked up more if he'd tried. I hope Kakashi scruffs him and whacks him with rolled-up newspapers when he's naughty, because Kotetsu really is a mannerless dog.
Poor Shu... come here, Shu-baby, your fangirls will cuddle you and pet you and hiss at Kotetsu for being an ass. Hell, we'll also feed him lines, because SPEAKING of ass..... H_H
...and Kotetsu is a walking trainwreck, dear God. 9_9 I mean, DEAR GOD. He couldn't have fucked up more if he'd tried. I hope Kakashi scruffs him and whacks him with rolled-up newspapers when he's naughty, because Kotetsu really is a mannerless dog.
Poor Shu... come here, Shu-baby, your fangirls will cuddle you and pet you and hiss at Kotetsu for being an ass. Hell, we'll also feed him lines, because SPEAKING of ass..... H_H
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, somehow I just wasn't expecting Kotetsu to be that stupid. If he goes to talk to Kakashi it will be the funniest thing ever. But Now I'm dying to know why Shu went to Ibiki. (But first, some hot smut featuring Kuro and Izumo would be nice.)
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I'm going to be late for work because I checked aff and found another update. LOL Thanks, I'll be smiling all day and no one will know why. More please and thanks for the quick update.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Shu but at least Ko knows he did "wrong". And Ko does want to learn how to have "gay" sex - Learning from Kakashi is a great idea.
Kuro and Izumo are so cute together - rimming and then piercing - what a great idea.
Kuro and Izumo are so cute together - rimming and then piercing - what a great idea.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe the nerve of Kotetsu!!!! Argh!!! I want to help Shu smack him around! Argh!!! As usual, I'm elated to see a new chapter and can't wait for the next! :D
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to dissent from what I suspect the majority POV on this chapter is: sure, Kotetsu's a bit of an insensitive ass, but I think he's entitled to be a bit wary and confused given his own experiences and the way he's been pursued. I'd actually be happier to see him just say "Okay, no screwing anyone for a while, I'm going to take a break."
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I do agree with Anonymous that he didn't do it on PURPOSE, and he's a good person who wants to make amends, but the brain connections just aren't there to REALIZE "okay, time out. I need to think about this."
...which is actually similar to two real guys I know. They just kept screwing up and making the mess deeper, and deeper (with me!) and I had to force them to SIT DOWN, shut up, and stop making it worse. THEY MEANT WELL, but it's like they were mentally incapable of taking a time-out to re-evaluate until somebody beat them over the head with a board. Treating them sort of like dogs actually helped- immediate feedback/correction on their actions, communicating that something is or is not appropriate, without getting mad or taking it personally (as much as I can help. -_-;;; I admit to a red haze over my vision when a long, bumpy conversation culminated in M saying "no offense, but I think I know you better than you do.") My dad's kind of that way, too... and some of my girlfriends, so it's not JUST a guy thing.
...Guys just somehow manage to fuck up more spectacularly more OFTEN with relationships than girls do, and probably for the same reason Kotetsu did- emotions and taking them into consideration when you speak is a "girl thing."
Kotetsu, it's like my momma said to me as a child: boys get their feelings hurt too. 9_9
THAT'S why Kotetsu is a walking trainwreck, because he's an idiot. Not unreasonably an idiot, not unrealistically an idiot, and not without redemption- HE CAN BE TAUGHT! It's not even completely his fault that he never learned to do this, because he's never HAD to. But he's still a relationship retard and needs special tutoring (KAKASHI), and possibly a special helmet with a disclaimer on it reading "STUDENT DRIVER." ^^;; Just so nobody honks his ass off the relationship highway while he's figuring out how to operate the metaphorical turn signals.
...which is actually similar to two real guys I know. They just kept screwing up and making the mess deeper, and deeper (with me!) and I had to force them to SIT DOWN, shut up, and stop making it worse. THEY MEANT WELL, but it's like they were mentally incapable of taking a time-out to re-evaluate until somebody beat them over the head with a board. Treating them sort of like dogs actually helped- immediate feedback/correction on their actions, communicating that something is or is not appropriate, without getting mad or taking it personally (as much as I can help. -_-;;; I admit to a red haze over my vision when a long, bumpy conversation culminated in M saying "no offense, but I think I know you better than you do.") My dad's kind of that way, too... and some of my girlfriends, so it's not JUST a guy thing.
...Guys just somehow manage to fuck up more spectacularly more OFTEN with relationships than girls do, and probably for the same reason Kotetsu did- emotions and taking them into consideration when you speak is a "girl thing."
Kotetsu, it's like my momma said to me as a child: boys get their feelings hurt too. 9_9
THAT'S why Kotetsu is a walking trainwreck, because he's an idiot. Not unreasonably an idiot, not unrealistically an idiot, and not without redemption- HE CAN BE TAUGHT! It's not even completely his fault that he never learned to do this, because he's never HAD to. But he's still a relationship retard and needs special tutoring (KAKASHI), and possibly a special helmet with a disclaimer on it reading "STUDENT DRIVER." ^^;; Just so nobody honks his ass off the relationship highway while he's figuring out how to operate the metaphorical turn signals.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor stupid Tetsu... Poor 'Coon chan! nyah! I love it!!! Kakashi master of Zen! LOL I so love this fic!!!! Please continue! ^>^