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for Izumo's Problem

by Hestia

schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor shu-kun;_; he must really like kotetsu to keep up with his bs for any amount of time^^;;
person luxeflex
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
At first when you introduced your OC's I was a bit hesitant, but seriously , they're just great! the story couldn't have been better with naruto characters instead. I usually ship kotetsu/izumo, but now your story turned kotetsu into an uke in my mind xD nothing more to say, your writing rules!
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh? Shu? What the hell? Why is Shu at Ibiki's place? What the hell did he do? Or did Kotetsu do something? (And do you intend to get poor Ibiki laid in this fic?)
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggling*
Trashed Ibiki is funny, because he makes other people uncomfortable. That recurring dead silence was awesome, and I liked how he was drunk enough to not care, and not not particularly care what he said. "Kakashi the Sex God of Konoha" made me giggle too... and yes, still on the bookcase, like an adorable pervy gargoyle.
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....also the drunken debates about knees and bareback sex. XD Drunk ninjas are funny creatures to watch.

Thanks!
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and this story just got better and better. and i like how you incorparate(?) everyone in without it seeming too obvious^_^V
person drivven
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY for the sex god of konoha! I really really love this and Shu and Kotetsu are awesome, please write more soon! (hugs*
person cynaga
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your work never fails to engage. It's uniquely you and delightfully orgasmic in such a non-conventional way.
person llyoung
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter. So want to go to an ANBU party (and I really want Kakashi to touch my "knee"). Love Ibiki - would love to have had the dream he had. Thanks for another wonderful chapter and a great story to wake up to in the morning.
person Word_Slave
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, man, that was an evil cliffie. I can't wait to see what Ibiki and Shu have to say. And now I'll beg. More Shu and Kotetsu please?
Slave