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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NoNoNo you cant stop .Give me more .Please. Untill the next chapter
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Ibiki deals with his problem.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I love this story! Did I tell you I love this story? :D Hehe I really liked the Iruka story and it one is really awesome as well. I love the way that you made Ibiki human with human needs as well. Can't wait to see how all these pan out. :D
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just finished the first chapter... damn.
Sorry, I'd love to write a long review about how amazing your writing skills are but I wont. Firstly because if I could review BEFORE actually reading the chapter, your awesome story wouldnt have erased my more coherent thinking capabilities. And secondly... you've probably already heard all that before anyways.
About Neji seeing Shino's doings, yes, he does see chakra points but as far as I know Shino's kikai hides them from the byakugan. I refer to the chuunin exams when Neji looked and all he saw was bugs. But on the other hand, I might be wrong.
Feel free to check out my own stories if you'd like. I have a little 3shot, Get, that you might like. Just a tip.
Keep up the good work! I'm off to read more... Ja!
Sorry, I'd love to write a long review about how amazing your writing skills are but I wont. Firstly because if I could review BEFORE actually reading the chapter, your awesome story wouldnt have erased my more coherent thinking capabilities. And secondly... you've probably already heard all that before anyways.
About Neji seeing Shino's doings, yes, he does see chakra points but as far as I know Shino's kikai hides them from the byakugan. I refer to the chuunin exams when Neji looked and all he saw was bugs. But on the other hand, I might be wrong.
Feel free to check out my own stories if you'd like. I have a little 3shot, Get, that you might like. Just a tip.
Keep up the good work! I'm off to read more... Ja!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot damn! this was H.O.T!! damn i'm drooling... oh more, more please... lol!!!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is by far my favorite out of this little series you've got going. And if you don't update it soon I will be forced to take drastic measures! (Maybe.)
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you piy a fic together please give me more
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Doing the happy dance!! more Shu, More Shu!!! Ahh, the chanting.... um, sorry. I liked that one, in case you couldn't tell.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh ahh! *flails arms* how do you make your anbu so gawd damn hot!!!??? First panther and now raccoon. god, is it like a qualification to be so hot to be an anbu? gosh, i love your anbu so much! i don't know who i like better, the silent panther or the teasing raccoon. oh i can't wait to see the other anbu in action, especially sweet little turtle, so adorable!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! More Kotetsu and Shu! this was my favorite chapter!