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Quote: “Now, pretty, focus for me. Here’s the million-yen question, how do you want to come for your first orgasm, hand or mouth?”

If Deidara were in that position then the question wont bother Kotetsu so much LOLz

Great fic, update soon!!

*LAUGHING*
Oh, Kotetsu. XD You mistook somebody for a CHAIR... well, that's understandable. And losing your internal monologue. Heck, I do that when I'm SOBER. But still. Very, very funny and cute. No wonder the ANBU think he's adorable. XD
Speaking of adorable and kind of weird, Kakashi sitting on the bookcase drinking through a straw was precious. ^^

“So if I don’t please you when I fuck you, you’re going say I molested you when drunk, and never give another guy a chance?”

“Yup, that’s the plan!”
...XD Oh, Kotetsu. God, you're such a character. XD! But you can't fault the boy's logic, though. Ethics, sure, but logic, no. X3

...Mmm. Oh, Shu, you're such a good man. Such a smooth, pretty, lovely man... and you certainly know how to take a sweet, wasted little boy like Kotetsu through his paces... Mmm. I'm not too impressed with Kotetsu (although his "I'm so toasted" point-of-view is interesting), but I'm very impressed with Shu, and I can't wait to see what he does when his narrator's able to pay better attention. ~___~ *sighs dreamily* I have something of a weakness for redheads myself... and Shu there is my favorite kind. ^-^
Second favorite would be a lovely little redheaded pet... Mmm. *purrs* Shu, though, sexy confident smooth redhead... best kind. ♥

And that is a GORGEOUS tatt he's got. *_*

Shu is just too hot! I.....*babbles inchoherently* Too good!

Sweet mercy! I think I almost swallowed my tongue!
HHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWT!!!!

That was the hottest conversion of a straight guy ever...nyah!!! I want to see how he deals with it the morning after... It was good that Shu decided not to 'do' him completely you know? That way it would be a conscious thing... nyah! Well done... fun, sexy and hot as hell... You never fail to amaze me... You must be getting tired of these kind of reviews..ne? I will try to think of something else to say...next time, ok?

Shikamaru has a really, really big problem, doesn't he? -wink-

Ooh, or Sasuke, or Naruto, or.. or.. Kiba..

woah...that was hot *fans herself*

Wonderful chapter and it was so funny too. Loved the "drunk" Ko saying his thoughts out loud. Loved the sex - it was so hot. Loved Shu's piercings and his tattoo.

OMG! That was even hotter than the rest! I love ShuxKotetsu! Please, please, please more!

One word- HOT!!!!