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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh and Kotetsu's drunking rambling so cute and Shu's dirty talk to funny :-)
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn this is so HOT! DAMN, I am so turned on I’m without words… where’s my vibrator. Just when I didn’t think you could get me hotter… there you go! I think steam is coming out of my ears! Please, Please, Please do not EVER stop writing! There should be a rating higher than 5 stars, you’d have it wrapped up! I’m going to have to read your stories again and again… and again! MORE PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU SO FUCKING MUCH!!!
Excellently executed! It's just like Tetsu to get wasted so that he could blame the scrum (which I need the recipe for) if he didn't like getting touched by Shu. I loved that his inner monologue ended up being spoken aloud too. And how smart of Shu to make him keep repeating his name. Would have liked to known what Kotetsu's thoughts were while tasting Shu, but I'm sure that you'll get to that when he's sober enough to enjoy it. Thank you so much for the piercings!! **DROOL** Absolutely icing on the cake!! I wonder if Kotetsu will eventually get his tongue pierced? I can't wait to see what happens "the morning after."
And was Ibiki at the party? Was there someone there to catch his eye, a pain slut in ANBU? Sai? Kimimaru? OC-the one whose name Kotetsu can't remember? And where has Izumo and Kyrohyou holed themselves up at?
And I know that the "problem" stories are more for ANBU semes looking for ukes but for some reason I think I'd really like to see Turtle looking for a seme, though not necessarily an ANBU. He sounds cute and small and I think it would be nice to change the dynamics a bit by having the uke be the one with more power than his chuunin or gennin seme. Just a thought. Or maybe an ANBU would be better.
Thank you soo much!
P.S. I want my own "Shu Chair"!!
Excellently executed! It's just like Tetsu to get wasted so that he could blame the scrum (which I need the recipe for) if he didn't like getting touched by Shu. I loved that his inner monologue ended up being spoken aloud too. And how smart of Shu to make him keep repeating his name. Would have liked to known what Kotetsu's thoughts were while tasting Shu, but I'm sure that you'll get to that when he's sober enough to enjoy it. Thank you so much for the piercings!! **DROOL** Absolutely icing on the cake!! I wonder if Kotetsu will eventually get his tongue pierced? I can't wait to see what happens "the morning after."
And was Ibiki at the party? Was there someone there to catch his eye, a pain slut in ANBU? Sai? Kimimaru? OC-the one whose name Kotetsu can't remember? And where has Izumo and Kyrohyou holed themselves up at?
And I know that the "problem" stories are more for ANBU semes looking for ukes but for some reason I think I'd really like to see Turtle looking for a seme, though not necessarily an ANBU. He sounds cute and small and I think it would be nice to change the dynamics a bit by having the uke be the one with more power than his chuunin or gennin seme. Just a thought. Or maybe an ANBU would be better.
Thank you soo much!
P.S. I want my own "Shu Chair"!!
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the sex (yummy bondage and sexual "torture"). Love a poetic Ibiki.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, yes, that was it, and the other ANBU had come to the same conclusion because just about every chakra signature in the building was either in the video monitor room or heading there.
*HOWLS laughing* Ah, they're all such pervs, I love it. ^^ And I love that it truly was "Party at Kurohyou's! Bring furniture!" They're all a bunch of jackasses and bastards, but they're caring jackasses and bastards. Like family. Family that tortures you, but won't let anybody else do it, including yourself.
^^ And it tickles me that Ibiki wants to have sex for purposes of gathering information about the effects of sex. It makes me laugh that he's starting to wax poetic, and it's even cuter that it bothers him.
Selling their nonprofit homemade porn. XD
...*SNORKS when Ibiki figures out what's going to happen to the camera* XD Yeah, just like family. Kinky, pervy, torturous family. Revenge runs rampant. I really like how Ibiki is amused by the realization that the tape is going to cut out... UNTIL IT HAPPENS. Grumpyface and pouting Ibiki may terrify his underlings, but... HEE. And why do I get the feeling that the Panther vs Ibiki infighting has only just begun?
Kichiro and Yoshito... LOLS.
Typo... :)
so unlike the old, silent, unsmiling Pather, that Ibiki hadn’t figured it out.
*HOWLS laughing* Ah, they're all such pervs, I love it. ^^ And I love that it truly was "Party at Kurohyou's! Bring furniture!" They're all a bunch of jackasses and bastards, but they're caring jackasses and bastards. Like family. Family that tortures you, but won't let anybody else do it, including yourself.
^^ And it tickles me that Ibiki wants to have sex for purposes of gathering information about the effects of sex. It makes me laugh that he's starting to wax poetic, and it's even cuter that it bothers him.
Selling their nonprofit homemade porn. XD
...*SNORKS when Ibiki figures out what's going to happen to the camera* XD Yeah, just like family. Kinky, pervy, torturous family. Revenge runs rampant. I really like how Ibiki is amused by the realization that the tape is going to cut out... UNTIL IT HAPPENS. Grumpyface and pouting Ibiki may terrify his underlings, but... HEE. And why do I get the feeling that the Panther vs Ibiki infighting has only just begun?
Kichiro and Yoshito... LOLS.
Typo... :)
so unlike the old, silent, unsmiling Pather, that Ibiki hadn’t figured it out.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
IBIKI I understand you ... I was so frustrated... nyah! I really wanted to see... yeah I confess I have vouyeuristic tendencies... heck why do you think I like to read fanfiction? LOL Great job... poor man... he really needs to get laid. After witnessing such a display of raw lust... and affection... oh yeah poor Pan... LOL Gimmme!!!!!
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So hot ^_^ Ibiki's problem is so underway!!! This series rocks
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved how it was getting really good, and then, poof, the tape shows an empty room^^
this is the best problem ever^_^V
this is the best problem ever^_^V
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please say there will be more soon! Please, please? I really love this problem!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I stalk you across sites! xD Woo, feels good to meet someone from y!gallery here *I already found kakashizgirl xD!!! *
Anyway, I can't remember if I reviewed this stories first chap on y!gallery, and upon seeing that you also had an aff account, I decided to review here. :3 I liked the story, pretty cool idea with the whole Ibiki having horny ANBU needing love. I love panther-san. D: He seems like he should be a part of the main cast or Naruto! xp Anyway, I will read the rest of this when I have time *damn finals to heck* and until then, much lurv!
Anyway, I can't remember if I reviewed this stories first chap on y!gallery, and upon seeing that you also had an aff account, I decided to review here. :3 I liked the story, pretty cool idea with the whole Ibiki having horny ANBU needing love. I love panther-san. D: He seems like he should be a part of the main cast or Naruto! xp Anyway, I will read the rest of this when I have time *damn finals to heck* and until then, much lurv!