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for Tomorrow That Never Comes

by angelofinnocence

schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... Aki is a faith healer!! Jesus be praised!!!



lol... keep up the good work. ^^
person Pinkie
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote that instead of sasuke looking for him, itachi comes looking for sasuke...when they meet up 1 of a couple things could happen
1) they fight one dies all is good
2) Haru is older and helps fight with her parents to keep aki safe
3) Itachi comes...sees whats happening...wants to become a citizian to konoha again just like his brother
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great story. I think Sasuke can or will forgive his brother. He's grown up alot, there fore he needs to move on, now that he has a new family to love.
person nyge98
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should follow the direction your story is going. Sasuke has changed so i think he should forgive his brother. Great story can't wait till the next chapter. I'm glad your continuing
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote Sasuke forgives Itachi!
person tash1021
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW SOOO SWEEETTTTTTTTTTTt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well personally i think the revenge thing is a bit played out but the forgivness thing is a new idea and i would love to see where you take it. but in the end this is your story and you are the one who decides what to do with it and if thats what you wanna do i'd love to read it and by the way awsome story
person Damp
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When is the whole 'angst' part of the story going to come up???

-Damp *Yeah, I love angst.*
person nyge98
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to first say that I LOVE THIS STORY. Second I want Sasuke to forgive Itachi.
person mls
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved these new chapters!! I'm for either of them. keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!