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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to find out how sasuke handles this situation!!!!!!!!! loved this chapter!!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao, Neji getting hurt by her, priceless.
Seriously, I had to laugh at that then at the part when Naruto gets home and she runs past sasuke, in the nude to see him.. haha, makes me think of something you probably did as a young child.
I love Haru though, such a funny three year old, a good character for the plot, that is for sure.
I loved this chapter, I found it highly amusing.
Good job hun.
<3 Keep up the story, I really like it. :D
Mess.
Seriously, I had to laugh at that then at the part when Naruto gets home and she runs past sasuke, in the nude to see him.. haha, makes me think of something you probably did as a young child.
I love Haru though, such a funny three year old, a good character for the plot, that is for sure.
I loved this chapter, I found it highly amusing.
Good job hun.
<3 Keep up the story, I really like it. :D
Mess.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how you mellow out Sasuke through his daughter. It is a nice change from the norm of fighting between Naruto and Sasuke to get Sasuke to open up and express his emotions. The bit with Neji in the last chapter was very fun to read. Thanks for sharing this.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the last chapter, I laughed so hard. Kids say the darnedest things. So funny, I can't wait for the rest.
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please more!!!
I love it! Cant wait for when they find out about the kid in naruto!!!
write soon please!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it! Cant wait for when they find out about the kid in naruto!!!
write soon please!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
You're going to give me cavities with all this sweetness.
You're going to give me cavities with all this sweetness.
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww, kawai moment in the chapter.
I accept this short chapter only because is it short and sweet and right to the point. Lol.
But you know I likie the fluff so... it is not surprise that i am pleased with this chapter.
I still must say that i like the Father Sasuke you have made sasuke into.. and the whole Haru getting upset over her spot being taken over by naruto was cute.. reminds me of another 3 year old we know and love. lol
Love the new chapter..
Btw.. i never did comment you on your previous chapter, i will say I liked it a lot, hehe naughty bits :D
Anyways, keep up the wonderful work.
<3 Fujin aka your koibito
I accept this short chapter only because is it short and sweet and right to the point. Lol.
But you know I likie the fluff so... it is not surprise that i am pleased with this chapter.
I still must say that i like the Father Sasuke you have made sasuke into.. and the whole Haru getting upset over her spot being taken over by naruto was cute.. reminds me of another 3 year old we know and love. lol
Love the new chapter..
Btw.. i never did comment you on your previous chapter, i will say I liked it a lot, hehe naughty bits :D
Anyways, keep up the wonderful work.
<3 Fujin aka your koibito
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, something is growing? hmmm, are you taking guesses? LOL! that was a beautiful lemon you wrote. i don't think i've read one from sasuke's perspective. and it was paced nicely too without a lot of verbiage. ;-)
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wooooooow This is ridiculously good.....Normally i don't like third person fics, but this is definitely an exception....I look forward to more updates. Keep up the detailed emotional work, we love it!
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my!
(I love this story!)
(I love this story!)