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for A Christmas Interlude

by vanessaclarke

schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was such a beautiful story! OMG I loved it soooo much! Serious that made my christmas you have no idea! I almost cried during that part when everyone was laughing at Naruto! He is such a sweetie pie in this story I love it! (kinda wish there was a little love scene but that's just the slight pervert in me) Thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much I love this story!
person Word_Slave
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Truthfully, I didn't really think this was that ooc!!! I loved it, and I'd love, love, love.... um LOVE to see a continuation on this... my thought is valentines day cherry popping, but please don't wait that long! Thanks. It made me smile. Slave
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person Sarryn
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely lovely! Wonderful prose style, so clean and clear, and put together so beautifully. I'll be carrying around a smile for the rest of the day. Thank you for this exquisitely crafted treat!
person kati
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was super sweet! I was literally tearing up when they had to read out the name's of who they got, it was so sad! I hope Gaara gets a clue on how to be a good bf/f and makes naruto happy like a candystick! (good metaphor, ne? I've always thought that candycanes are very happy little creatures! ^0^) It would be nice to see a sequel with perhaps how people at school are and how their relationship develops but only if you took it as seriously as this one (well, when i say 'seriously' I mean well-written. (So why didn't i just say well-written you ask, instead of adding a bracketed note in the middle of a sentence? Which, i know, can be very annoying? *enter alternate personality* Well, heck, I just don't know. *exit alternate personality*)) Nice work!
person Xenobia
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I could care less that this fic is OOC...it made me feel warm and fuzzy inside.

Thank you for making me smile!

Xenobia
person cynaga
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!!!!
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's so adorable. Those two are simply cute together as it is. :-) Thank you for sharing!
person BennyPeace
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was amazingly adorable.
person tasukigirl
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was SO cute! I love this pair, I really do and I love how you wrote them. Thank you for sharing this fic.