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December 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story, sucks that it's only a few chapter. I loved what you have and the way Naruto is is priceless. Have five girls of his become pregnant already is something I enjoyed cause I love the girls you have chosen for the harem so far. Update dude, your story rocks and I can't say I don't enjoy the lemons!
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January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fun little story, thanks!
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December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
fucking awesome
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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I liked it xD, hope you update this
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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Bwhahaa he such a drama queen. Oh god I thought it was Naruto who got owned by a tree root. It was jiraiya, that's even worse lulz. Oh god Naruto is his muse. Hahaha jiraiya ruined it. Hahaah he one thousand years of death'ed him. Aww ladies shoulda been Naruto-sama. Hahaha he had mednin level control at seven. Hahaah tsunade gonna love him XD. hahaa he in it for the honies. Oh god jiraiya used sarutobi's crystal orb for research xD. Another awesome chapter, hope haku makes it.
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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Score he got the ice queens Xd. Damn you I feel cheated, shoulda written that lemon. Yay he wants hina. Aww sakura hate. Hahahaa one of his wind clones was flirting with hina. Bwahaha oh god he proved sasgay is a fairy. Hahah made ino faint. Hahaah kakashi loves his dream.
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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay ayame in the bag. Oh god teuchi walked in on them. Hahah I thought he'd use harem jutsu. Bwhahaha kakashi's wake up reaction was hilarious, if he puts it youtube it woulda had more than 20mil views. Heck yeah knock tsunami up lulz. I hope tsunade is in the harem. Naruxtsu 4ever!!!!
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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha he gonna get banned from ramen if teuchi catches him again. Poor ayame he always leaves her to handle teuchi. Wonder if tazuna gonna catch him and tsunami xD. Hahaah he made out with haku.
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January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good fic
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey really like your story hope you continue it