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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've never been a fan of pussy!Kyuubi. Anyway, other than that I think it's worth a read.
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, excellent lemon. I can't wait to see Tsunami and Haku meet and have some fun with Naruto. Stupid Uchiha. As for Sakura.... she's reached an all time low to me, at least the original had some common sense, this version seems pretty brain dead.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic. Please update as soon as you can. I've always loved harem pairings so this will be great for me. I think he should hook up with Ino and Hinata also. I mean when Naruto has a kid with Hinata it would have the bloodline train of the Hyuuga clan and that of Naruto's clan. Anyway keep up the story.
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I'd like to see Mikoto join the harem, maybe have Yugito too, the more the merrier.
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story but u've changed quite a few things.. Like there ages. And how come Kakashi is calling Naruto,Naruto-dono... So Sasuke is gay and what will happen to him when he is faced to choose between power and his home in Konoha... I am wondering about a few other things but those are the ones that are standing out the most.. E-mail me if u ever need to talk I will be more than happy to help out if u want... Josh
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh.
I'm finding this story hilarious and am enjoying it immensely... however, I am having a hard time with your constant berating of Sasuke's gayness. Its cool if he's gay and its funny as hell that the tables are turned and he's pulling a Sakura over our favorite blond, but it bothers me how anti-gay Kakashi is (especially with no explanation.) Its not only the kind of thing that seems over the top and takes you out of the story, but its also sort of offensive. It seems unnecessary. So I hope you'll tone it down in the future.
Additionally, I'm really enjoying Naruto's personality in this. Though I do have some questions. You mention he fought with Shukaku... to which I would reply: when? Also, I think its awesome that he primarily uses only his own powers -- however what role does his merger with the fox play in all this? When he starts repopulating Konoha with little Namikaze/Uzumaki brats, will they be half demon as well? Let us know and keep up the good work.
I'm finding this story hilarious and am enjoying it immensely... however, I am having a hard time with your constant berating of Sasuke's gayness. Its cool if he's gay and its funny as hell that the tables are turned and he's pulling a Sakura over our favorite blond, but it bothers me how anti-gay Kakashi is (especially with no explanation.) Its not only the kind of thing that seems over the top and takes you out of the story, but its also sort of offensive. It seems unnecessary. So I hope you'll tone it down in the future.
Additionally, I'm really enjoying Naruto's personality in this. Though I do have some questions. You mention he fought with Shukaku... to which I would reply: when? Also, I think its awesome that he primarily uses only his own powers -- however what role does his merger with the fox play in all this? When he starts repopulating Konoha with little Namikaze/Uzumaki brats, will they be half demon as well? Let us know and keep up the good work.
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say about this story is...wow fuckin awesome....update soon!!!
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um....one question...will naruto turn gay (narusasu) or will it just be het?
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bi-sexual Tsunami... sweet! I can't wait to see Inari's reaction to his new Aunties in Konoha. I'm eager to see where things go from here, especially with Zabuza and Haku.
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggles pervertedly* Ohhhh.... this is good.... real good.... keep this up and I'm going to end up reccomending this story to every one! hehe actually i'll probably do that anyway. I love this version and would very much like to see this go anime... unfortunately the chances of that happening are nil but still.... *heaves a sigh* I'm hooked, and will continue to read til you finish. Good job.